for Fool Lystar5/4/2007 c10 
7ArwenGreenEyes
Oh, I'm happy that Jarrin's all right. Now, the next thing to resolve...this thing with K'beth...and how he loves Lystar...which I think is the greatest thing ever! :) I'm a sucker for romance. Sigh. But anyway, awesome story, can't wait to read more. !
~AGE~
7ArwenGreenEyesOh, I'm happy that Jarrin's all right. Now, the next thing to resolve...this thing with K'beth...and how he loves Lystar...which I think is the greatest thing ever! :) I'm a sucker for romance. Sigh. But anyway, awesome story, can't wait to read more. !
~AGE~
5/4/2007 c10 4paisley is a kind of pattern
well done. you really tied everything up so far very neatly. i like the way you pulled the time loops together through k'beth's point of view. thanks for writing.
4paisley is a kind of patternwell done. you really tied everything up so far very neatly. i like the way you pulled the time loops together through k'beth's point of view. thanks for writing.
5/4/2007 c10 27PernDragonrider
Loved this chapter too. Lystar and Caliath probably have a scolding and other things waiting for them in the Wyer, but excellent chapter and brought full circle.
Excellent work!
Pern
27PernDragonriderLoved this chapter too. Lystar and Caliath probably have a scolding and other things waiting for them in the Wyer, but excellent chapter and brought full circle.
Excellent work!
Pern
5/3/2007 c9 bree
more please? i'll bring you a cookie.
more please? i'll bring you a cookie.
4/24/2007 c9 Fia
*laugh* Oh, very good! 5/5! 100%!
Suspense: great.
Setting: great.
Theme and storyline: great.
*grin* Dragon-and-Rider bond: excellent!
All in all: a beautiful, well written story.
Is Rosith going to Rise? And Caliath fly her?
*laugh* Oh, very good! 5/5! 100%!
Suspense: great.
Setting: great.
Theme and storyline: great.
*grin* Dragon-and-Rider bond: excellent!
All in all: a beautiful, well written story.
Is Rosith going to Rise? And Caliath fly her?
4/23/2007 c4 Fia
Dragons have smooth, soft hide. Never rough. Yes, I'm talking about Pernese dragons. They have soft hide, and their eyes are faceted, like insects. They turn different colors depending on the dragon's emotions. Eg. an angry dragon has orange/red eyes, a hungry dragon has red eyes, a happy dragon has blue eyes. The colors change.
I am an expert on Pernese dragons, being a Dragonrider myself. A Bronzerider. Keeganth is my dragon. I was Sofia. Now, as a Rider, I am Fia.
Dragons have smooth, soft hide. Never rough. Yes, I'm talking about Pernese dragons. They have soft hide, and their eyes are faceted, like insects. They turn different colors depending on the dragon's emotions. Eg. an angry dragon has orange/red eyes, a hungry dragon has red eyes, a happy dragon has blue eyes. The colors change.
I am an expert on Pernese dragons, being a Dragonrider myself. A Bronzerider. Keeganth is my dragon. I was Sofia. Now, as a Rider, I am Fia.
4/23/2007 c1 Fia
YES! NON-CANON, OH YEAH! I think this chapter was absolutely perfect!
YES! NON-CANON, OH YEAH! I think this chapter was absolutely perfect!
4/19/2007 c9 ginalee
Hopefully Lystar will see that even though Jarrin's a nice person, K'beth's the one for her. I hate it when someone's love is not returned! (Guess I'm just a softie). Thanks for updating, this is really interesting.
Hopefully Lystar will see that even though Jarrin's a nice person, K'beth's the one for her. I hate it when someone's love is not returned! (Guess I'm just a softie). Thanks for updating, this is really interesting.
4/16/2007 c9 4paisley is a kind of pattern
yay! another chapter! nice addition, but i really wanted to know what would go on between k'beth and lystar in more detail. well, it was a good summary.
thanks for writing.
4paisley is a kind of patternyay! another chapter! nice addition, but i really wanted to know what would go on between k'beth and lystar in more detail. well, it was a good summary.
thanks for writing.
3/18/2007 c8 4paisley is a kind of pattern
great story! some of your transitions seem a little abrupt, but your characters are wonderful and unique. looking forwards to reading more!
4paisley is a kind of patterngreat story! some of your transitions seem a little abrupt, but your characters are wonderful and unique. looking forwards to reading more!
3/5/2007 c8 40ThePink1 at Reefside.Net
kudos on a wonderful story, true, and I'm adding my vote for a double dash of romance, since Jarrin and Lystar worked so well together, and it's painfully obvious K'beth loves her too. Catch ya on the flipside,
A J
40ThePink1 at Reefside.Netkudos on a wonderful story, true, and I'm adding my vote for a double dash of romance, since Jarrin and Lystar worked so well together, and it's painfully obvious K'beth loves her too. Catch ya on the flipside,
A J
3/2/2007 c8 PSTurner
Well, you do love to leave little cliffs don't you. This was a very good chapter, and I so look forward to the next one.
Thanks for writing.
Pam
Well, you do love to leave little cliffs don't you. This was a very good chapter, and I so look forward to the next one.
Thanks for writing.
Pam
3/1/2007 c8 Amere
Excellent chapter.
Excellent chapter.
3/1/2007 c8 27PernDragonrider
Wonderful chapter and the description of the positions of the moons and everything just added to the delightful reading this chapter provided.
Anxiously looking forward to more and keep up the very exceptional work.
Pern
27PernDragonriderWonderful chapter and the description of the positions of the moons and everything just added to the delightful reading this chapter provided.
Anxiously looking forward to more and keep up the very exceptional work.
Pern