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11/30/2007 c1 16Marlicat
I... don't usually... like death fics, but...

beautiful.
4/5/2007 c1 2Balance in the Dark
i liked it. very poetic in my oppion though i don't know how much that counts for... Im realy not much of a poetry person. But it was good.
2/1/2007 c1 SilverPantherSM
Very good. I would however like to know how he was killed and who killed him. I'm sure that others would like to know also. I'm don't mean that to be an insult, if that is what it sounds like. Even if you don't put into it, how he was killed, and who killed him, it will still be very good. I really like it. You really did a great job on it.
1/16/2007 c1 John Westcott
Very sad. Very touching. Very nicely done. ;)
12/19/2006 c1 Ria
WOW really good, its sad it made me want to cry

i like the format also it was really good

ur my idol
12/4/2006 c1 1autumnk13
OMFG! That was like the worst poem I ever read! It totally sucked! Lol just kidding it rocked. You never told me you were so good at poems! Oh, you spelled mourn wrong and I have no other suggestions...n00b. TTYL!
12/4/2006 c1 vikky
wow, thats a awesome poem..man i wish i could write something like that. keep up the good work linz.
11/30/2006 c1 5Sunset16
AW! SO SAD! But very good! you're a great poet! keep up the good work!

Sunset

Ps(Jesus Loves You!)
11/30/2006 c1 16Shunatsu
0.0 Awesome. Awesome. Awesome (continues and chokes for a day, but you get the point)
11/30/2006 c1 chocofusion
i luv how it rythem and the word flows...it's a nice poem but very gory.

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