for Deny No more1/2/2017 c2 TeRo-ChAn
Amazing story, I lived the plot. Original and unique! Gonna be reading this again sometime soon!
Amazing story, I lived the plot. Original and unique! Gonna be reading this again sometime soon!
6/14/2016 c2 Guest
What's with calling her "little one"? I find that odd
What's with calling her "little one"? I find that odd
12/23/2012 c3 nothingbutblue
hey! great story! i liked it :)
hey! great story! i liked it :)
4/2/2012 c3 nothingbutblue
good job! :)
good job! :)
11/21/2011 c3 
1Brown Eyed Shinobi
GREAT JOB! why does he keep calling her "little one"? have u been reading ERAGON? lolkeep up the great work and read and review my story please!
1Brown Eyed ShinobiGREAT JOB! why does he keep calling her "little one"? have u been reading ERAGON? lolkeep up the great work and read and review my story please!
1/2/2011 c3 16Fuko Ibuki
I loved your story! The descriptions, everything was just perfect! The only thing that could've been improved was perhaps elaborating more on the feelings Neji and Tenten harbored and what had gone on between them in the past. The other thing is, how did they come to love each other? Just a friendly suggestion. My favorite part was how you had Neji say "My little one" so lovingly, almost as if she were his little child. Very romantic in my opinion. Your story was very well written and I enjoyed every minute of it. I also have another question pertaining to the alleged war going on. What was this war? I'm not that far into Shippuden, so I don't know if the war is included in the story line or if you simply made it up for the sake of the story. A more in depth description and outline of the current situation in Konaha would've been appreciated. Other than that, it was great!
Love,
Fuko Ibuki-Chan
16Fuko IbukiI loved your story! The descriptions, everything was just perfect! The only thing that could've been improved was perhaps elaborating more on the feelings Neji and Tenten harbored and what had gone on between them in the past. The other thing is, how did they come to love each other? Just a friendly suggestion. My favorite part was how you had Neji say "My little one" so lovingly, almost as if she were his little child. Very romantic in my opinion. Your story was very well written and I enjoyed every minute of it. I also have another question pertaining to the alleged war going on. What was this war? I'm not that far into Shippuden, so I don't know if the war is included in the story line or if you simply made it up for the sake of the story. A more in depth description and outline of the current situation in Konaha would've been appreciated. Other than that, it was great!
Love,
Fuko Ibuki-Chan
12/29/2010 c3 Nicole
FFFFFFFFF damnit your story left me daydreaming about all the konoha war, what happenes before tenten was sent for the scroll hell i'm imaginning the fight were sakura died, i wish you would have made it longer but well the point was to center al around najiten romance, and i liked it alot so i'm not really complaining xD be happy :3 i know i am x3
PS: also if you see somthing wrong in my writing or way of expressing myself ummm just know that all i said was in good nature , i really dont know how to express myself in english ñ.ñUu i'm a spanish speaker, see ya!
FFFFFFFFF damnit your story left me daydreaming about all the konoha war, what happenes before tenten was sent for the scroll hell i'm imaginning the fight were sakura died, i wish you would have made it longer but well the point was to center al around najiten romance, and i liked it alot so i'm not really complaining xD be happy :3 i know i am x3
PS: also if you see somthing wrong in my writing or way of expressing myself ummm just know that all i said was in good nature , i really dont know how to express myself in english ñ.ñUu i'm a spanish speaker, see ya!