for Soundscape11/14/2024 c39 Nyctophilicme
This actually makes me wonder if that poisoned cup of tea was for Kakashi but he switched it to save him.
This actually makes me wonder if that poisoned cup of tea was for Kakashi but he switched it to save him.
5/4/2021 c39 
17mylife9
this was such a good story! sad that you're not continuing it, but understandable!
i really liked the idea of the yochigan, especially tied in with how naruto got it and wanted to use it. of course, i liked the pining that was happening between kakashi and naruto as well! talk about painful! i smiled so hard when they first kissed, haha, even though it was in such a tense atmosphere.
overall, really a very good story! you've created a great plot line, and i really liked how you treated all the fun machinations with the elders, danzo, the hyuuga clan, and the other countries.
17mylife9this was such a good story! sad that you're not continuing it, but understandable!
i really liked the idea of the yochigan, especially tied in with how naruto got it and wanted to use it. of course, i liked the pining that was happening between kakashi and naruto as well! talk about painful! i smiled so hard when they first kissed, haha, even though it was in such a tense atmosphere.
overall, really a very good story! you've created a great plot line, and i really liked how you treated all the fun machinations with the elders, danzo, the hyuuga clan, and the other countries.
12/20/2020 c1 Flame punch
Haven’t read this, not sure I will but that’s mostly because of the description. Naruto in his 5 year old body and kakanaru yaoi tag? That screams boku no pico to me and really makes me uncomfortable.
Haven’t read this, not sure I will but that’s mostly because of the description. Naruto in his 5 year old body and kakanaru yaoi tag? That screams boku no pico to me and really makes me uncomfortable.
10/19/2020 c39 TigrezzTail
THANK YOU! You have no idea how much it means to at least get the idea for the rest of the story and not just leave it hanging. although I'm almost glad you didn't write it, as it sounds like it got rather dark. That is not to anything negative about your writing style, as your story is so well written and entertaining. Thank you for all that you have given.
THANK YOU! You have no idea how much it means to at least get the idea for the rest of the story and not just leave it hanging. although I'm almost glad you didn't write it, as it sounds like it got rather dark. That is not to anything negative about your writing style, as your story is so well written and entertaining. Thank you for all that you have given.
10/31/2018 c38 Shadowpletlove
Thank you for writing as long as you did. I love ur story. I wish u luck with what u write now.
:)
Thank you for writing as long as you did. I love ur story. I wish u luck with what u write now.
:)
10/7/2018 c38 Guest
This story has been absolutely amazing, though i am sad that this is discontinued, I enjoyed reading this so much! you might not see this but I really loved it xD its also kinda weird that when I was on the message, sad music was playing but it was also quite fitting, no?
This story has been absolutely amazing, though i am sad that this is discontinued, I enjoyed reading this so much! you might not see this but I really loved it xD its also kinda weird that when I was on the message, sad music was playing but it was also quite fitting, no?
1/9/2018 c4 Guest
shouldn't the sandaime know that naruto was a hunter nin? why is he asking to see if naruto matured enough for a c-rank? has he not gone on higher as a hunter?
shouldn't the sandaime know that naruto was a hunter nin? why is he asking to see if naruto matured enough for a c-rank? has he not gone on higher as a hunter?
2/19/2016 c38 Ninja girl
Good story! Too bad it's discontinued! Although, the rating should be changed from M to T, because, since there isn't any yaio (I hope I spelled that right...) there isn't any reason for it to be rated M.
Good story! Too bad it's discontinued! Although, the rating should be changed from M to T, because, since there isn't any yaio (I hope I spelled that right...) there isn't any reason for it to be rated M.