for Photograph12/24/2006 c5 
7laustic
This is an interesting chapter. I like getting insight into the characters' mind. You did a good job with this fic.
7lausticThis is an interesting chapter. I like getting insight into the characters' mind. You did a good job with this fic.
12/21/2006 c4 hasleftthesite
Although it would have been nice to have Tsuzuki heal the wounds on Hisoka's back, this is indeed better. I hadn't thought about the fact that it would be suspicious but then again we know about Tsuzuki's existence and presence near Hisoka while Hisoka's father doesn't and would indeed see the healing of the wounds on Hisoka's back as a new proove that his offspring is indeed demonic.
Can you ever get used to being whipped? If that is indeed the case in Hisoka's case then the mistreating of him has gone on way too lang and is it high time that someone does something about it. Besides he may have gotten physically used to the abuse but I don't think you can ever get used to it psychologically. I believe that as long as you still haven't given up mentally on yourself and still have hope, you will never accepts that kind of abuse mentally. Only a person who has given up on everything is able to shut his mind down and accept that abuse mentally but even then it isn't really an acceptence cause the mind just isn't longer there. The mind doesn't care anymore about what happens to the body cause it has seperated itself from it. Yet I have to say that there lies also a lot of truth in Hisoka's explanation to Tsuzuki. Maybe it is possible to indeed just give up a part of your mind, the part that has difficulties with the abuse, and live normally on for the rest. Yet isn't this called repression or something like that then? And won't it come back haunting you sooner or later?
By the way, are you planning on also bringing Hisoka's mum into the story?
Ah I wouldn't want to leave Hisoka's side either. Can't Tsuzuki report by sending a bird or making a mental link or something like that? I felt so bad for Hisoka and I wonder if Hisoka is now also expecting Tsuzuki to also abandon him now that he knows more about Hisoka. I wouldn't be surprised if his mind is taking that road.
Are we allowed to change the future? God, this is a very good question. Changing one little thing in someone's life will automatically change a whole lot more due to the interaction and circumstances. Who knows what ripple effect Tsuzuki would cause should he indeed stop the rape and the curse.
""I’m going to save him." Tsuzuki said determinedly" Well, hurray for his determination but know that there are more then one way to save a person.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Gillie
Although it would have been nice to have Tsuzuki heal the wounds on Hisoka's back, this is indeed better. I hadn't thought about the fact that it would be suspicious but then again we know about Tsuzuki's existence and presence near Hisoka while Hisoka's father doesn't and would indeed see the healing of the wounds on Hisoka's back as a new proove that his offspring is indeed demonic.
Can you ever get used to being whipped? If that is indeed the case in Hisoka's case then the mistreating of him has gone on way too lang and is it high time that someone does something about it. Besides he may have gotten physically used to the abuse but I don't think you can ever get used to it psychologically. I believe that as long as you still haven't given up mentally on yourself and still have hope, you will never accepts that kind of abuse mentally. Only a person who has given up on everything is able to shut his mind down and accept that abuse mentally but even then it isn't really an acceptence cause the mind just isn't longer there. The mind doesn't care anymore about what happens to the body cause it has seperated itself from it. Yet I have to say that there lies also a lot of truth in Hisoka's explanation to Tsuzuki. Maybe it is possible to indeed just give up a part of your mind, the part that has difficulties with the abuse, and live normally on for the rest. Yet isn't this called repression or something like that then? And won't it come back haunting you sooner or later?
By the way, are you planning on also bringing Hisoka's mum into the story?
Ah I wouldn't want to leave Hisoka's side either. Can't Tsuzuki report by sending a bird or making a mental link or something like that? I felt so bad for Hisoka and I wonder if Hisoka is now also expecting Tsuzuki to also abandon him now that he knows more about Hisoka. I wouldn't be surprised if his mind is taking that road.
Are we allowed to change the future? God, this is a very good question. Changing one little thing in someone's life will automatically change a whole lot more due to the interaction and circumstances. Who knows what ripple effect Tsuzuki would cause should he indeed stop the rape and the curse.
""I’m going to save him." Tsuzuki said determinedly" Well, hurray for his determination but know that there are more then one way to save a person.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Gillie
12/19/2006 c4 laustic
Aww, I love how Tsuzuki wants to save Hisoka, even if it means breaking the rules. The way Tsuzuki gets so protective of Hisoka just melts my heart.
Aww, I love how Tsuzuki wants to save Hisoka, even if it means breaking the rules. The way Tsuzuki gets so protective of Hisoka just melts my heart.
12/15/2006 c3 hasleftthesite
Nice to see how Hisoka is still keeping to himself even though he knows Tsuzuki to be his angel. For someone like Hisoka it is only normal that he will need time to open up to other people and that in the mean time he tries to interact through asking the other person a lot of questions about him. That way he can test the waters a bit. See if the other is trust worthy and it will give Hisoka also the time to adjust to this person and learn to accept him which then eventually will lead to him telling stuff about himself. But to make that happen it will take time ... lots and lots of it.
I can understand that Hisoka is a bit confused about why Tsuzuki is there cause a few years ago I also always thought that angels were just around to protect people. It's after I heard a lecture about angels and all the different kinds of angels that are there that I know now better. Guardian angels are just a small fraction of the angel society and protecting people is just a small part of angel's jobs.
Okay, so Tsuzuki didn't tell Hisoka what future he is there to ensure but being an empath, wouldn't Hisoka have felt Tsuzuki's inner struggle and wouldn't that lead him to realise that whatever that future is, it isn't a bright or good one? Of course it's possible that Tsuzuki had his shields in place but then still, if I saw someone hesitate like Tsuzuki I would have a bad feeling.
Had some troubles with the Hisoka/father conversation. It felt kind of off for me. I don't think Hisoka would stand so proudly and icely up to his father seeing what he has been through in the past and still is going though at his father's hands. Coupled with that, it made the whole Hisoka torture scene also seem off to me. I know it's just my personal opinion but because of the out of characterness I just couldn't get a feel for the situation at hand. Sorry.
Did like the part where Hisoka was pushing Tsuzuki away by trying to blast him each time he got close to him. In a way it is too expected that Hisoka would want to be alone after what just happened. He has had to deal with it always on his own right uptil now and seeing that he also has trust issues ... well it's only normal for him that he would want to be left alone after going through such an ordeal.
Have to love Tsuzuki though for not giving up and pushing just through the blasts and craddling Hisoka against him to offer the boy any comfort he could give him. And placing them in that cocoon created by his wings was so beautiful. Just loved that little part.
Hisoka breaking down in Tsuzuki's arms is also no surprise. It's the first time he gets confronted with such a carrying person who seems to have the best interest at heart with him. I think anyone in Hisoka's situation would start to cry.
Well that's it for me.
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
Nice to see how Hisoka is still keeping to himself even though he knows Tsuzuki to be his angel. For someone like Hisoka it is only normal that he will need time to open up to other people and that in the mean time he tries to interact through asking the other person a lot of questions about him. That way he can test the waters a bit. See if the other is trust worthy and it will give Hisoka also the time to adjust to this person and learn to accept him which then eventually will lead to him telling stuff about himself. But to make that happen it will take time ... lots and lots of it.
I can understand that Hisoka is a bit confused about why Tsuzuki is there cause a few years ago I also always thought that angels were just around to protect people. It's after I heard a lecture about angels and all the different kinds of angels that are there that I know now better. Guardian angels are just a small fraction of the angel society and protecting people is just a small part of angel's jobs.
Okay, so Tsuzuki didn't tell Hisoka what future he is there to ensure but being an empath, wouldn't Hisoka have felt Tsuzuki's inner struggle and wouldn't that lead him to realise that whatever that future is, it isn't a bright or good one? Of course it's possible that Tsuzuki had his shields in place but then still, if I saw someone hesitate like Tsuzuki I would have a bad feeling.
Had some troubles with the Hisoka/father conversation. It felt kind of off for me. I don't think Hisoka would stand so proudly and icely up to his father seeing what he has been through in the past and still is going though at his father's hands. Coupled with that, it made the whole Hisoka torture scene also seem off to me. I know it's just my personal opinion but because of the out of characterness I just couldn't get a feel for the situation at hand. Sorry.
Did like the part where Hisoka was pushing Tsuzuki away by trying to blast him each time he got close to him. In a way it is too expected that Hisoka would want to be alone after what just happened. He has had to deal with it always on his own right uptil now and seeing that he also has trust issues ... well it's only normal for him that he would want to be left alone after going through such an ordeal.
Have to love Tsuzuki though for not giving up and pushing just through the blasts and craddling Hisoka against him to offer the boy any comfort he could give him. And placing them in that cocoon created by his wings was so beautiful. Just loved that little part.
Hisoka breaking down in Tsuzuki's arms is also no surprise. It's the first time he gets confronted with such a carrying person who seems to have the best interest at heart with him. I think anyone in Hisoka's situation would start to cry.
Well that's it for me.
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
12/13/2006 c3 67WingsofSmoke
EPP! Nagare's such a bastard! He SHOULD have been killed. I Agree with Tsuzuki. Whoever made up these damn rules needs to die a slow and torturous death. And poor Hisoka, getting a whip into his back like that. I kinda know how that feels (whenever my parents were angry at me, no matter how small the thing was, they'd take a belt to my back. They haven't done it since we moved, though, so that's a relief, but the thing is, I can't tell anyone cause my marks have vanished).
Anyway, I see friendship beginning to form and maybe even a little love! Oh, now I cannot wait for another chapter. But I can read no more on Must study for last 2 Finals tomorrow!
Ja ne for now!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara
67WingsofSmokeEPP! Nagare's such a bastard! He SHOULD have been killed. I Agree with Tsuzuki. Whoever made up these damn rules needs to die a slow and torturous death. And poor Hisoka, getting a whip into his back like that. I kinda know how that feels (whenever my parents were angry at me, no matter how small the thing was, they'd take a belt to my back. They haven't done it since we moved, though, so that's a relief, but the thing is, I can't tell anyone cause my marks have vanished).
Anyway, I see friendship beginning to form and maybe even a little love! Oh, now I cannot wait for another chapter. But I can read no more on Must study for last 2 Finals tomorrow!
Ja ne for now!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara
12/11/2006 c2 hasleftthesite
Tsuzuki is so right! I still don't get how anyone can say that Hisoka is a demon. Just look at that sweet angelic face! His parents really deserve a good kick under the butt, or make that a few kicks.
Loved the way you described Hisoka. It was very good and very realistic by first making him fear Tsuzuki, then show no interest in him what so ever to come to that child like curiousity. I think I liked that the most. The way he was so full of wonder and child like innocent when seeing Tsuzuki's wings and touching them.
And Tsuzuki was so kawaii by understanding that Hisoka wanted to touch his wings and thus brought his wing around for Hisoka to touch it. Kawaii! But why didn't Tsuzuki contradict Hisoka when he said that he was a demon? It would have been the first thing I would have done and after that I would have done anything in my power to make Hisoka realise that I was an angel and that I was there for him.
Well Tsuzuki let the cat out of the bag already about who he is but what about Hisoka's future? In a way Tsuzuki is being contradictory cause he wants to stay by Hisoka to show him that he isn't like the boy's parents and thus won't hurt him but at the same time his staying with Hisoka also has to do with his task and that task involves making sure that Hisoka gets raped and cursed. And wheter Tsuzuki likes it or not, if this will indeed take place then he will hurt the boy more then his parents ever could. Over the month he'll most probably come to trust Tsuzuki and when then that rape and cursing finds place and he discovers that Tsuzuki was with him to make sure that it all happened ... well that betrayal of his trust will hurt Hisoka more then anything his parents can ever do to him.
Of course we still don't know what's going to happen so it's still all up for grabs.
Good chapter but watch out for spelling mistakes. There were quite a few and seeing as English is my thrid language I normally don't catch on to mistakes but now I did cause at times it made the sentence a bit confusing.
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
Tsuzuki is so right! I still don't get how anyone can say that Hisoka is a demon. Just look at that sweet angelic face! His parents really deserve a good kick under the butt, or make that a few kicks.
Loved the way you described Hisoka. It was very good and very realistic by first making him fear Tsuzuki, then show no interest in him what so ever to come to that child like curiousity. I think I liked that the most. The way he was so full of wonder and child like innocent when seeing Tsuzuki's wings and touching them.
And Tsuzuki was so kawaii by understanding that Hisoka wanted to touch his wings and thus brought his wing around for Hisoka to touch it. Kawaii! But why didn't Tsuzuki contradict Hisoka when he said that he was a demon? It would have been the first thing I would have done and after that I would have done anything in my power to make Hisoka realise that I was an angel and that I was there for him.
Well Tsuzuki let the cat out of the bag already about who he is but what about Hisoka's future? In a way Tsuzuki is being contradictory cause he wants to stay by Hisoka to show him that he isn't like the boy's parents and thus won't hurt him but at the same time his staying with Hisoka also has to do with his task and that task involves making sure that Hisoka gets raped and cursed. And wheter Tsuzuki likes it or not, if this will indeed take place then he will hurt the boy more then his parents ever could. Over the month he'll most probably come to trust Tsuzuki and when then that rape and cursing finds place and he discovers that Tsuzuki was with him to make sure that it all happened ... well that betrayal of his trust will hurt Hisoka more then anything his parents can ever do to him.
Of course we still don't know what's going to happen so it's still all up for grabs.
Good chapter but watch out for spelling mistakes. There were quite a few and seeing as English is my thrid language I normally don't catch on to mistakes but now I did cause at times it made the sentence a bit confusing.
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
12/10/2006 c2 7laustic
Oh, that was good. I like your description of Hisoka in this fic and I like how Tsuzuki is determined to stay by Hisoka no matter what.
7lausticOh, that was good. I like your description of Hisoka in this fic and I like how Tsuzuki is determined to stay by Hisoka no matter what.
12/8/2006 c1 hasleftthesite
Definitely an interesting idea. Having angels who for once don't protect people from bad things happening to them but are there to make sure that the bad things do happen.
I am curious how you're going to continue and where it will all lead. Maybe the reason the rape and curse have to happen has something to do with Hisoka's afterlife. Why do I have this feeling that it has to happen to Hisoka in order for him to become an angel himself after his death and will he be with Tsuzuki after his death? Of course should Hisoka find out about Tsuzuki's real reason of being there with him and who Tsuzuki really is, then it is quite possible that he will push Tsuzuki away.
Will Tsuzuki be able to go through with his task and how is he going to wurm himself into Hisoka's life?
As I said, I'm curious for the continuation but this was already a very good first chapter!
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
Definitely an interesting idea. Having angels who for once don't protect people from bad things happening to them but are there to make sure that the bad things do happen.
I am curious how you're going to continue and where it will all lead. Maybe the reason the rape and curse have to happen has something to do with Hisoka's afterlife. Why do I have this feeling that it has to happen to Hisoka in order for him to become an angel himself after his death and will he be with Tsuzuki after his death? Of course should Hisoka find out about Tsuzuki's real reason of being there with him and who Tsuzuki really is, then it is quite possible that he will push Tsuzuki away.
Will Tsuzuki be able to go through with his task and how is he going to wurm himself into Hisoka's life?
As I said, I'm curious for the continuation but this was already a very good first chapter!
Kisses and hugs
Gillie
12/6/2006 c1 67WingsofSmoke
AW! MAN! I wanted to make the whole Tsu-anegl thing into a fic! I can't believe someone beat me to it and I've been planning for months! my dreams are shattered! *cries*
Muse: You can still do it. It wasn't the same plot line exactly, compared to yours.
Saphira: I need permission from the author first so people don't think I'm plaigerizing! You should know that, Muse! *cries again*
Muse: *sighs*
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara and Muse
P.S. Good start
67WingsofSmokeAW! MAN! I wanted to make the whole Tsu-anegl thing into a fic! I can't believe someone beat me to it and I've been planning for months! my dreams are shattered! *cries*
Muse: You can still do it. It wasn't the same plot line exactly, compared to yours.
Saphira: I need permission from the author first so people don't think I'm plaigerizing! You should know that, Muse! *cries again*
Muse: *sighs*
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara and Muse
P.S. Good start