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7/17/2009 c2 2Lovestruck Serenity
you have a few mistakes here and there with spelling, and dropping a few words here and there. nothing major. i get that it's a song fic, but I would suggest you put that in your summary otherwise it surprises the reader when they begin to read. i don't think you have gone too fast, but you have definitely set yourself up for a multi-chapter story here hon. you could put a little more detail, and elaborate a bit more, but that's about it. i like the story, it's a sweet beginning!
12/16/2006 c1 3Cori Rain
cool! I hope you'll have this done in time for Christmas!
12/7/2006 c1 1iRedeem
I really like the first chapter.I can't wait for the next chapter.

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