for Fall to Pieces12/28/2009 c2 deathwolfkitten
this is the first and only story that makes me cry. I love it. It is just so sad! this is one of my favorite stories.
this is the first and only story that makes me cry. I love it. It is just so sad! this is one of my favorite stories.
12/17/2007 c2 
7Amayada
so what happens next?...what would Al, Winry, & the rest of the gang do? What their reactions will be?...Is this the end?...are they going to be recarnated & be able to love each other in the future?...nice story by the way...really hope that you will update soon...I can't wait to see what happens
7Amayadaso what happens next?...what would Al, Winry, & the rest of the gang do? What their reactions will be?...Is this the end?...are they going to be recarnated & be able to love each other in the future?...nice story by the way...really hope that you will update soon...I can't wait to see what happens
10/25/2007 c2 Deletedaccountk
Oh boy.. I absolutely love Roy's POV. I'm o glad you included it because I felt that this fic was missing Roy's POV. I swear though, I thought Roy truly didn't like him in the first chapter. I'm glad you cleared things up. Thanks for the wonderfully angstful fanfiction.
Oh boy.. I absolutely love Roy's POV. I'm o glad you included it because I felt that this fic was missing Roy's POV. I swear though, I thought Roy truly didn't like him in the first chapter. I'm glad you cleared things up. Thanks for the wonderfully angstful fanfiction.
5/19/2007 c2 3supernatural-Fma-junkie15
I am crying so hard it is no joke. I sometimes couldn't even read the story because my vision was to blurry. This is so sad i could feel myself in their positions and it made me so sad. I really liked the story. I have been crying for ten minutes and i can't stop. I never in real life want to go through this.
Thx for the story really good writing.
3supernatural-Fma-junkie15I am crying so hard it is no joke. I sometimes couldn't even read the story because my vision was to blurry. This is so sad i could feel myself in their positions and it made me so sad. I really liked the story. I have been crying for ten minutes and i can't stop. I never in real life want to go through this.
Thx for the story really good writing.
5/11/2007 c1 6Keltheras
I'm sorry if I offended you, I really like your story, and just so you know, I have a really bad way with writing what I'm really thinking, and that review that you wrote about my other story, I guess I deserved that...Well, if that doesn't say how stupid I was being, I was drunk that night...Well bye
6KeltherasI'm sorry if I offended you, I really like your story, and just so you know, I have a really bad way with writing what I'm really thinking, and that review that you wrote about my other story, I guess I deserved that...Well, if that doesn't say how stupid I was being, I was drunk that night...Well bye
5/10/2007 c2 21loser in the gutter
*blank stare*
OMFG YOU KILLER. no, jkjk. but... ed and... both...
damn good writers and their endings.
death.hmm... okie dokie. i can deal... i think.
21loser in the gutter*blank stare*
OMFG YOU KILLER. no, jkjk. but... ed and... both...
damn good writers and their endings.
death.hmm... okie dokie. i can deal... i think.
5/9/2007 c2 katie
so, that's the ending? what the crap! that's frickin awful! :P well, glad to here they're still alive in your other fic.
so, that's the ending? what the crap! that's frickin awful! :P well, glad to here they're still alive in your other fic.
5/9/2007 c2 6Keltheras
number one, a question...WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!
no offence.
number two, another question, WHO ARE YOU GOING TO KILL NEXT? AL?WINRY?WHO!
plz return this:)
6Keltherasnumber one, a question...WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!
no offence.
number two, another question, WHO ARE YOU GOING TO KILL NEXT? AL?WINRY?WHO!
plz return this:)
5/9/2007 c2 9MARYLOVER
Too sad, almost made me cry, WHAT A STORY!
Well waiting for the epilogue then... hope it won't take too long.
9MARYLOVERToo sad, almost made me cry, WHAT A STORY!
Well waiting for the epilogue then... hope it won't take too long.
12/10/2006 c1 Deletedaccountk
my goodness. So beautiful. You can really express deeply over a person's depression, and I find it lovely. ^^ (Is an angst/death freak.. lawl.)
I understand how you write too. In my depressed moods, I love to write, because then I get so descriptive and emotional, like you've shown here.
my goodness. So beautiful. You can really express deeply over a person's depression, and I find it lovely. ^^ (Is an angst/death freak.. lawl.)
I understand how you write too. In my depressed moods, I love to write, because then I get so descriptive and emotional, like you've shown here.