for Dirty Little Secret9/19/2009 c5 
44Drama Queen And You Know It
Char... Hurry up and update please.. I really want to know who this girl is.. Though if you have given up with this tell me who the girl is and i will write this for you
44Drama Queen And You Know ItChar... Hurry up and update please.. I really want to know who this girl is.. Though if you have given up with this tell me who the girl is and i will write this for you
5/11/2009 c1 3SlytherinsHeiress2.0
Learn what a beta is! You should either use one or stop posting stories that have atrocious spelling and grammar mistakes that make me cringe. Do you even know what a paragraph is? Also, there's a thing called spellcheck on your computer, use it please.
3SlytherinsHeiress2.0Learn what a beta is! You should either use one or stop posting stories that have atrocious spelling and grammar mistakes that make me cringe. Do you even know what a paragraph is? Also, there's a thing called spellcheck on your computer, use it please.
3/27/2009 c6 44Drama Queen And You Know It
This is interesting Char. I's a little confused about the story but other than that. It's good. I really want to know what the couple is!
44Drama Queen And You Know ItThis is interesting Char. I's a little confused about the story but other than that. It's good. I really want to know what the couple is!
2/6/2009 c6 26Girly 411
Aww! That's so sad that Shar got sick and Ry left her alone. I wonder what could be happening. This mystery is getting more and more...well, mysterious. Plz update soon. I'm really curious as to who this could really be. I can't even check one name off my mental checklist yet. Update soon! Luv ya char!
26Girly 411Aww! That's so sad that Shar got sick and Ry left her alone. I wonder what could be happening. This mystery is getting more and more...well, mysterious. Plz update soon. I'm really curious as to who this could really be. I can't even check one name off my mental checklist yet. Update soon! Luv ya char!
2/5/2009 c6 23rkfollower
Wow! you're really good with this "hiding who ryan's real gf is" thing. Haha... I think that maybe it's Taylor or Kelsi but a part of me says it Taylor becauce i can totally see ryan and kelsi just as best friends and that maybe Kelsi is the only one that knows about Ryan's affair but I could be wrong. Haha... The Ryelsi fan in me still wants it to be ryan and kelsi! so i'm still hoping its kelsi.
23rkfollowerWow! you're really good with this "hiding who ryan's real gf is" thing. Haha... I think that maybe it's Taylor or Kelsi but a part of me says it Taylor becauce i can totally see ryan and kelsi just as best friends and that maybe Kelsi is the only one that knows about Ryan's affair but I could be wrong. Haha... The Ryelsi fan in me still wants it to be ryan and kelsi! so i'm still hoping its kelsi.
1/17/2009 c5 j5821
Hoping,praying,begging that it's kelsi
Hoping,praying,begging that it's kelsi
1/16/2009 c5 26Girly 411
Hey! Okay, this was a really good chappie!
Wow, I've been making a mental checklist in my head and pretty much I can't check off a single one of the girls. Humph.
Really good and it still makes for a really good cliffie. Lots of suspense.
Update soon! :D
26Girly 411Hey! Okay, this was a really good chappie!
Wow, I've been making a mental checklist in my head and pretty much I can't check off a single one of the girls. Humph.
Really good and it still makes for a really good cliffie. Lots of suspense.
Update soon! :D
1/16/2009 c4 1SkyeGavin
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1/16/2009 c5 23rkfollower
nice chapter! i don't know if kelsi is Ryan's secret girl, but i do hope so!
23rkfollowernice chapter! i don't know if kelsi is Ryan's secret girl, but i do hope so!
12/26/2008 c4 1520173
From your Secret Santa:
Oh wow, haha, so I guess it's not Taylor. Or maybe... he's just a man whore (I can see that). You might want to put a warning at the top for rating, or just change it to M anyway.
Merry Christmas!
From your Secret Santa:
Oh wow, haha, so I guess it's not Taylor. Or maybe... he's just a man whore (I can see that). You might want to put a warning at the top for rating, or just change it to M anyway.
Merry Christmas!
12/26/2008 c2 1520173
From your Secret Santa:
I can say that I really wasn't expecting Taylor (Sharpay? Maybe). It's an interesting story that makes you want to keep reading.
That being said, you may also want to do a grammar check for some parts, or have it automatically done in Mic. Word. Also have paragraphs separated by character.
(Uch I feel like this sounds mean. But I dont mean anything)
But I really like it, so I'm going to stop reviewing and continue reading.
Merry Christmas!
From your Secret Santa:
I can say that I really wasn't expecting Taylor (Sharpay? Maybe). It's an interesting story that makes you want to keep reading.
That being said, you may also want to do a grammar check for some parts, or have it automatically done in Mic. Word. Also have paragraphs separated by character.
(Uch I feel like this sounds mean. But I dont mean anything)
But I really like it, so I'm going to stop reviewing and continue reading.
Merry Christmas!
11/29/2008 c4 26Girly 411
oh thank you, no wonder you wanted me to hurry and read this. well, i wish i had sooner but school is always in the way. I really luv this fic. such a great idea and you know i luv all your ideas. :) Well, okay, luvd this chappie cuz I think I hav an idea of what may be happening. But then again I've been wrong before. AS much as I wanted this to be Rypay, I'm not entirely sure, though I'm still leaning towards it. Maybe for what's going on with Taylor could be study help and all that? Hm...ponders for a minute...then again, am I sensing a little crush between Ryan and Gabi there? Or well, maybe just Gabi silently crushing on him maybe...and there's no doubt that Ryan's just looking out for her. okay, so there's a million and one ways this could go. I tend to overexaggerate a lot. can't ya tell? Okay then, so the whole Kelsi thing. It could be her...I wouldn't mind that since they're so cute together...or it could just be the whole regular spending time together thing. or not...so confuddling. anywho...any number of them could be the one. unless there's someone totally new I don't know about yet. okay, then, I can see you find it fun to confuddle me, so I'll just let you update some more. And I'm totally getting more ppl to read this so they can review and you can update faster. You're such a great writer you have no idea how awesome this stuff is! Update soon! Luv ya! :D
26Girly 411oh thank you, no wonder you wanted me to hurry and read this. well, i wish i had sooner but school is always in the way. I really luv this fic. such a great idea and you know i luv all your ideas. :) Well, okay, luvd this chappie cuz I think I hav an idea of what may be happening. But then again I've been wrong before. AS much as I wanted this to be Rypay, I'm not entirely sure, though I'm still leaning towards it. Maybe for what's going on with Taylor could be study help and all that? Hm...ponders for a minute...then again, am I sensing a little crush between Ryan and Gabi there? Or well, maybe just Gabi silently crushing on him maybe...and there's no doubt that Ryan's just looking out for her. okay, so there's a million and one ways this could go. I tend to overexaggerate a lot. can't ya tell? Okay then, so the whole Kelsi thing. It could be her...I wouldn't mind that since they're so cute together...or it could just be the whole regular spending time together thing. or not...so confuddling. anywho...any number of them could be the one. unless there's someone totally new I don't know about yet. okay, then, I can see you find it fun to confuddle me, so I'll just let you update some more. And I'm totally getting more ppl to read this so they can review and you can update faster. You're such a great writer you have no idea how awesome this stuff is! Update soon! Luv ya! :D
11/21/2008 c2 Girly 411
okay, I really luvd this, but woah! How many girlfriends does Ryan have? He' making passes at pretty much everyone! pur. me likey the irony of that. pur. kinda cute in a way. I mean, seriously, it could be all of them for all I know! OOH! it's really good! Keep going! Don't stop here! PWEASE? pwease pwease pwease? PWEASE? don't leave me hanging like this. I'm dieing to know what happens. cliffies are so unfair! but they keep me hanging...get it? cliffhanger? hanging on? yeah, i'll just be quiet now and let you read my lovely review. you did this on purpose. you made it seem like he was with pretty much every girl on purpose just to confuddle me! Either that or he is with every single girl and he just doesn't know it, or I just don't know it, or YOU just don't know it. Wait...what? ok, i'm gonna just walk away slowly now and wait politely for another chappie. pwease? begs. puppy dog eyes. gives paw.
okay, I really luvd this, but woah! How many girlfriends does Ryan have? He' making passes at pretty much everyone! pur. me likey the irony of that. pur. kinda cute in a way. I mean, seriously, it could be all of them for all I know! OOH! it's really good! Keep going! Don't stop here! PWEASE? pwease pwease pwease? PWEASE? don't leave me hanging like this. I'm dieing to know what happens. cliffies are so unfair! but they keep me hanging...get it? cliffhanger? hanging on? yeah, i'll just be quiet now and let you read my lovely review. you did this on purpose. you made it seem like he was with pretty much every girl on purpose just to confuddle me! Either that or he is with every single girl and he just doesn't know it, or I just don't know it, or YOU just don't know it. Wait...what? ok, i'm gonna just walk away slowly now and wait politely for another chappie. pwease? begs. puppy dog eyes. gives paw.