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3/3/2013 c1 Cathy
Wow. I always had a lot of sympathy for Jack, and this was just fantastic. He should've had the chance to do these things...God, you've made me all depressed now! DX But that was seriously a fantastic story, really well-written and atmospheric, I loved it to pieces. Keep up the awesomesauce work dude! XD
9/24/2012 c1 70Tara Laurel
Aw! Great and unique story! I love the Christmas one and how Jack tells Avery to go back to bed and start over. So cute. Avery seems like a fitting name Jack would choose. Nicely done.
3/19/2008 c1 christina
i really liked your story it was good i hope you will be writing more
12/2/2007 c1 609Ghostwriter
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
7/11/2007 c1 tlm1633
oh wow! bravo! bravo! the one about his daughter sent me crying it was beautiful! actually this whole pieace was beautiful! You made his character come alive in vivid imagery. Totally love it!
3/1/2007 c1 2Aspiring Empath
5 Things Starrie has NEVER done...

1. Own a's a personal dream, don't be dissin'

2. Swim the English Channel.

3. Shave my head.

4. Pass Calculus


What's wrong with me? Bad Starrie *slaps hand* Well, never fear my dear, I'm here and it's clear that we're about to give a review to you, it's true.

I did love this. I thought each scenario was absolutely Delicious...yes, delicious. Or delectable...either one is a definite synonym to this story...I especially liked the Paris scene.

Well, off to go study calc, look up llama ads in the newspaper, find some scissors, and brush up on my swimming skills...maybe join the Y. Only four more things to do before my life is complete!

Au Revoir! (see, haha Paris...Jack...French...*uncomfortable laugh*...nevermind)

2/27/2007 c1 ImAdctd2A3rdClssRkStr
Five Things Addy's Computer Never Wanted Her To Do... okay, so I only really have one... and that would be to review!

But again... I shall not be defeated.

These one-shots have been semi-reviewed by me in the sense that I've told you how much I love them... but have never actually reviewed.

The time has come!

This one-shot shows why I love your style so much... it's different from everything else- and it's perfect. From 1 to 5, Ophilly, this was wonderful.

YAYAYAY! I'm so happy to finally be able to REVIEW? Isn't it wonderful?

(Oh, yes, yes... you love me... don't lie...)

Sorry that this is short... but I'm pushing my computer to its limits and we still have more reviews to go!


2/3/2007 c1 Yvonnia
Aw, I love it. Especially No.4, but that could be cause I'm a daddy's girl.
1/23/2007 c1 1Rinse and Repeat
I thought I reviewed this. Guess not, huh?

Well, I absolutely love this. I liked seeing Jack in such different situations in one story. My favorite is the last one of course. The whole thing is kind of bittersweet since Jack would/will never get the chance to do any of those things.

Fantastic as always. I love your one-shots. Easier for me to review. ;]

+Athena Moralias.

PS. Sorry for the short review. I'll get back to giving better ones sooner or later.
1/20/2007 c1 8ProTempore
No! You have to update. I love these. I wish Jack would have ended up happily married but I guess it was better this way. Anyway, I loved this. I like Jack's character and his diff. situations also.
12/29/2006 c1 QtButterflyGrl
T-T Okay, *sniff* don't cry, just pretend that *tears spilling over* Jack didn't die *hic* in the movie! *full out sobbing* Dammit! I feel like kicking the writer/director/whoever came up with the idea 2 kill off Jack where it really the cahones! Poor Jack didn't deserve 2 die *inner self* (damn straight, he didn't)! Enough of my ranting, I liked ur story. I hope 2 see more.

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year! X3

~QtButterflyGrl ;D

*puts on steel-toe boots* Someone point 2 me where this writer guy is. If it's a girl, I'll kick them 2! The hell is wrong w/them? Killing my Jack like that, ur asses r mine now!
12/28/2006 c1 307Omnicat
That was nice. Bittersweet, but I have a taste for that. My thumbs are up.
12/14/2006 c1 13ScottyBaby
Hey, babe! Thought I'd review one of your stories since you so wonderfully reviewed mine! This is VERY cute! I adore "five things that never happened" stories, and you did a very good job with this one! I also like that you incorporated a number of different plot lines in there, like Jack going to college, Jack and his girlfriend, Jack and his kid *squee!* with a mother who abandoned them...nice work. The last one is definitely my fave. Rock star Jack = love. Keep it up!
12/13/2006 c1 vinylscope
First off, thanks for being a sweetheart and reviewing my story with such love. WHEE!

This idea was sure a great one. A bunch of "if onlys" if Jack had only survived. :( ... the Christmas one with Avery was my favorite, because I can imagine Jack being, "okay, go back to bed and we'll start over!" and cute and funny like that.

Although the image of Garrett Hedlund in only his boxers is enough to make me thoughtgasm, I still enjoyed each one. Mrowr. Love Jack. Love GH. Love Four Brothers. Loved these snippets. Great job!

12/12/2006 c1 pwrhungryjr
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