for True Brothers of Strength1/22/2018 c3 Guest
could have been good
could have been good
1/19/2010 c3 hnzck
Hi, I thought about your other story and well... Either I've already read yours or there is another one as well.
What i want to say about this story is: It really has some potential there, especially since Both Naruto and Sasuke are trained by Kyuubi and not Just Naruto travelling with Kyuubi coming back and kicking everybody's asses. Then just barely 13 years old Naruto decides to start building a Harem and after a few dates confessing his "love" to whomever there is, after that: Hiatus.
What I'm saying is you would definetly make this story awesome, and that idea of yours, the stealing (or rather adoption since you offered it): I personally would rather read it from the pencil of the original Author, then just somebody going over your idea and modifying it, rather then thinking more about the plot of an original story. It's just i read quite a few adopted story and most of them are just continueing where the Original plot stopped, going on for a few chapters but then again the Hiatus because they paid it no mind what to write, rather then just writing and stopping, simply because they just say "great story, too bad you stopped, but i would like to continue it" without even thinking about what to write.
Well enough shit-chat, espescially since my english isn't perfect yet. Well, at least i didn't need to translate anything to german, just for being able to understand what's going on. Bye, hope you think about what i said (or rather wrote) and tell me what you think of it.
Hi, I thought about your other story and well... Either I've already read yours or there is another one as well.
What i want to say about this story is: It really has some potential there, especially since Both Naruto and Sasuke are trained by Kyuubi and not Just Naruto travelling with Kyuubi coming back and kicking everybody's asses. Then just barely 13 years old Naruto decides to start building a Harem and after a few dates confessing his "love" to whomever there is, after that: Hiatus.
What I'm saying is you would definetly make this story awesome, and that idea of yours, the stealing (or rather adoption since you offered it): I personally would rather read it from the pencil of the original Author, then just somebody going over your idea and modifying it, rather then thinking more about the plot of an original story. It's just i read quite a few adopted story and most of them are just continueing where the Original plot stopped, going on for a few chapters but then again the Hiatus because they paid it no mind what to write, rather then just writing and stopping, simply because they just say "great story, too bad you stopped, but i would like to continue it" without even thinking about what to write.
Well enough shit-chat, espescially since my english isn't perfect yet. Well, at least i didn't need to translate anything to german, just for being able to understand what's going on. Bye, hope you think about what i said (or rather wrote) and tell me what you think of it.
1/19/2009 c1 Maria
HAKUXZABU! NOT NARUXHAKU YOU STUPID CUNT!
HAKUXZABU! NOT NARUXHAKU YOU STUPID CUNT!
10/13/2008 c3 Pumpkin
DELETE THIS HIT! IT SUCKS!
DELETE THIS HIT! IT SUCKS!
12/5/2007 c3 Vampire
finsh the story
finsh the story
6/7/2007 c2 
2writer of yuri
oh well i was just planning on using the idea of naruto and sasuke being best freinds and then they are both trained by kyuubi, it would be a great help if you could give me ideas on my stories and ill do the same for you
2writer of yurioh well i was just planning on using the idea of naruto and sasuke being best freinds and then they are both trained by kyuubi, it would be a great help if you could give me ideas on my stories and ill do the same for you
6/4/2007 c3 writer of yuri
well i really lied this story and where it was going, if you dont mind i would like to use it in one of my stories once i finish some more on the ones im working on now
well i really lied this story and where it was going, if you dont mind i would like to use it in one of my stories once i finish some more on the ones im working on now
3/19/2007 c3 Denim
omg! someone pleese continue this story (if not the author themself) its too good to waste! why stop writing it?
omg! someone pleese continue this story (if not the author themself) its too good to waste! why stop writing it?
1/14/2007 c2 Takeno no Hikari
This story has potential, but there is one thing I would like to mention.
The Uchiha Massacre was commited by a 13 year old Itach, making Naruto and Sasuke 7-8 however in this they are both 5 making Itachi 10, which is before he was even jounin I want to say although he may have been. So I'm sure you see where I'm going with this...
This story has potential, but there is one thing I would like to mention.
The Uchiha Massacre was commited by a 13 year old Itach, making Naruto and Sasuke 7-8 however in this they are both 5 making Itachi 10, which is before he was even jounin I want to say although he may have been. So I'm sure you see where I'm going with this...
12/29/2006 c1 11sexyinumama
oh another choice 'umi me'( blue eye) or any other combination of wat I wrote earlier or 'aka' (red) u could put that in too. ;)
11sexyinumamaoh another choice 'umi me'( blue eye) or any other combination of wat I wrote earlier or 'aka' (red) u could put that in too. ;)