for Male Trouble9/24/2011 c1 Long Live BRUCAS
Definitely better than the show.
Love Bling being there for both of them
Definitely better than the show.
Love Bling being there for both of them
2/8/2007 c1 3jaldjf
Yes, you're way is much, much better than the real episode (does Mrs Moreno live on the roof?). Great story! Enjoyed it very much.
Yes, you're way is much, much better than the real episode (does Mrs Moreno live on the roof?). Great story! Enjoyed it very much.
12/13/2006 c1 
22Reilynn
WOW - a lot of action in a short story, of course you kind of .. stopped before you got to the ACTION .
I think fanfiction lets you add another chapter ... you could check. :D
Yes, your way is better. Great story, thanks for sharing.
22ReilynnWOW - a lot of action in a short story, of course you kind of .. stopped before you got to the ACTION .
I think fanfiction lets you add another chapter ... you could check. :D
Yes, your way is better. Great story, thanks for sharing.
12/13/2006 c1 25Mari83
Yep, a much better line of events.
“Max stares at Logan, unable to decide for a minute whether she should give in to her impulse to mop the floor with him.”
Would have been a very appropriate reaction:-)
25Mari83Yep, a much better line of events.
“Max stares at Logan, unable to decide for a minute whether she should give in to her impulse to mop the floor with him.”
Would have been a very appropriate reaction:-)
12/13/2006 c1 5BlueAngel137
Great story. It's way more romantic than the episode "Female Trouble" and much better too. You know how much I like some action ;), but I also enjoyed this beautiful fic. Thanks.
5BlueAngel137Great story. It's way more romantic than the episode "Female Trouble" and much better too. You know how much I like some action ;), but I also enjoyed this beautiful fic. Thanks.
12/12/2006 c1 3lkaplon
Hey,
Your way was so much better! Why couldn't you have been writing the show? Now, I know you said this was a one shot, but really I can see a series here... Maybe going to Japan... fighting some Japanese ninga bad guys to get to the doctor... the doc finishing the cure... hum... Anyway it was just an idea. But, seriously, though, would you consider it? *Pleading look*
3lkaplonHey,
Your way was so much better! Why couldn't you have been writing the show? Now, I know you said this was a one shot, but really I can see a series here... Maybe going to Japan... fighting some Japanese ninga bad guys to get to the doctor... the doc finishing the cure... hum... Anyway it was just an idea. But, seriously, though, would you consider it? *Pleading look*
12/12/2006 c1 5homicidalslayer
Okay, First off, Love the story. But What's your issue with Mrs Moreno?
"The Mrs. Moreno debacle doesn't happen. A/N: those of you that know me know that is my biggest peeve – still not buying the mysterious floating fortress or any other ridiculous ideas."
Excuse my boldness, but WTF?
Is this about Mrs Moreno living above Logan even though Logan's apartment is labled "Penthouse"? Because there's an explanation for that, if you're interested. If this is why, let me know. If not, never mind
5homicidalslayerOkay, First off, Love the story. But What's your issue with Mrs Moreno?
"The Mrs. Moreno debacle doesn't happen. A/N: those of you that know me know that is my biggest peeve – still not buying the mysterious floating fortress or any other ridiculous ideas."
Excuse my boldness, but WTF?
Is this about Mrs Moreno living above Logan even though Logan's apartment is labled "Penthouse"? Because there's an explanation for that, if you're interested. If this is why, let me know. If not, never mind
12/12/2006 c1 annie200
Your way was definitely better! I so enjoyed this..realling uplifting fluff that still keeps M and L in character. WShame it's a one-off...
Your way was definitely better! I so enjoyed this..realling uplifting fluff that still keeps M and L in character. WShame it's a one-off...