7/30/2009 c1 mustang4ever
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2/10/2009 c1 Twilightgirl2
i LOVE it jetara is the best and people i'll just clue you in JET LIves i don't care if they by they i mean all of the stuck up jerks who run avatar killed him off. i absoulutly refuse to belive it so there
i LOVE it jetara is the best and people i'll just clue you in JET LIves i don't care if they by they i mean all of the stuck up jerks who run avatar killed him off. i absoulutly refuse to belive it so there
10/21/2008 c1 to-lazy-to-login
lol me either, but then agian i am too lazy to login most times XD
great ficlet! so cute!
lol me either, but then agian i am too lazy to login most times XD
great ficlet! so cute!
7/1/2008 c1 1Browncoat01
Very well done. You should write a Jetara chapter fan fic. It'd go well. Just keep the same humor. don't get all melodramatic like someof the crazy fan girls around here
Very well done. You should write a Jetara chapter fan fic. It'd go well. Just keep the same humor. don't get all melodramatic like someof the crazy fan girls around here
4/13/2008 c1 Center of the Universe
I like it. It's funny.
I like it. It's funny.
5/28/2007 c1 The Cookie Thief
Cute! I liked it! Jetara pwnage, sweet!
Poor Jet...poor, pervy Jet...
xD
Peace out!
The Cookie Thief
Cute! I liked it! Jetara pwnage, sweet!
Poor Jet...poor, pervy Jet...
xD
Peace out!
The Cookie Thief
1/11/2007 c1 KxJ 4EVA
I think it is kool so far! so yeah!
I think it is kool so far! so yeah!
12/18/2006 c1 2InsaneRaden
I almost feel that I HAVE to flame this story now, just because you put up that last thing. It's almost like a challenge. But... I won't, I'll just be my normal brutally honest self.
I don't think that Jet is really this stupid, and if he just woke her up while back at the camp under the pretense of waking her from a bad dream it could have been a much better(and longer) fan fic. I'm kind of hoping you'll make a second chapter for this which is actually a re-write with the suggested story-line above in which Aang actually is awake and hears Jet approach and quiet Katara. It could explore all threes' personalities and their shortcomings. Also a possible rivalry for Katara's affections between Jet and Aang. Just suggesting, but it would be cool of you to do this since I don't have enough time to write a Jetara story because I'm writing a Jet-Lee story.
Hugs and kisses from the Lord.
I almost feel that I HAVE to flame this story now, just because you put up that last thing. It's almost like a challenge. But... I won't, I'll just be my normal brutally honest self.
I don't think that Jet is really this stupid, and if he just woke her up while back at the camp under the pretense of waking her from a bad dream it could have been a much better(and longer) fan fic. I'm kind of hoping you'll make a second chapter for this which is actually a re-write with the suggested story-line above in which Aang actually is awake and hears Jet approach and quiet Katara. It could explore all threes' personalities and their shortcomings. Also a possible rivalry for Katara's affections between Jet and Aang. Just suggesting, but it would be cool of you to do this since I don't have enough time to write a Jetara story because I'm writing a Jet-Lee story.
Hugs and kisses from the Lord.
12/14/2006 c1 89SaiyanWarrior200
Cute, poor jet he just doesn't have any luck with Katara, he's been frozen to a tree, almost drowned by her, and in this one he gets waterwhipped.
Cute, poor jet he just doesn't have any luck with Katara, he's been frozen to a tree, almost drowned by her, and in this one he gets waterwhipped.