for Lucky Seven1/10/2014 c1 Elly
I like the story, it ain't bad. I just don't really see Kain taking another being under his wing as of it were nothing, especially a human half werewolf. It's out of character for him, as far as Raziel you got him perfectly, I can see him being the loving sympathetic one.
I like the story, it ain't bad. I just don't really see Kain taking another being under his wing as of it were nothing, especially a human half werewolf. It's out of character for him, as far as Raziel you got him perfectly, I can see him being the loving sympathetic one.
12/17/2011 c24 
8The Grim Reeper
You just had to add a naked Raziel, huh? xD
Aww, Amaryllis and Sabastian are finally together... I wonder how long that'll last.
Can't wait to see more! It was a great chapter, as always :) Keep up the great work Lil' V!
~Grim
8The Grim ReeperYou just had to add a naked Raziel, huh? xD
Aww, Amaryllis and Sabastian are finally together... I wonder how long that'll last.
Can't wait to see more! It was a great chapter, as always :) Keep up the great work Lil' V!
~Grim
12/16/2011 c24 2Azura Soul Reaver
It is interesting to see how the brethren are changing, and to see those two finally together!
2Azura Soul ReaverIt is interesting to see how the brethren are changing, and to see those two finally together!
5/4/2010 c23 8The Grim Reeper
Hey Lil'V! I'm finally back. Only planned to be away from FF for a while, guess I lost track of time :S Well, I ain't dead, that's the main thing, lol. Reading all of your updates now, the stories are getting better and better :D Not particularaly fond of Voice, though. Keep up the great work!
~Grim
8The Grim ReeperHey Lil'V! I'm finally back. Only planned to be away from FF for a while, guess I lost track of time :S Well, I ain't dead, that's the main thing, lol. Reading all of your updates now, the stories are getting better and better :D Not particularaly fond of Voice, though. Keep up the great work!
~Grim
9/23/2009 c1 1Anarchived
I liked this chaptyer! I'm terying to read one chapter of each of your stories before the weekend! You're such a good writer! I love the way you characterized Zephon and the humor mixed with the suspense is awesome! Can't wait to read more!
1AnarchivedI liked this chaptyer! I'm terying to read one chapter of each of your stories before the weekend! You're such a good writer! I love the way you characterized Zephon and the humor mixed with the suspense is awesome! Can't wait to read more!
4/29/2009 c22 7Dragon Ma'am
this chapter was just out there! i was a little afraid to read more after Raziel and Turel started fighting.
7Dragon Ma'amthis chapter was just out there! i was a little afraid to read more after Raziel and Turel started fighting.
12/2/2008 c21 1Shark-Kain
wow im totally addicted to ur fanficts theyr fantastic!
i like ur style of writing too!
i like how you captured the relationship between kains sons
especially Zephon *how i love zephon lmao*
thank u btw for reviewing my story i am very greatful!
i thought writin the fanficts would be a total loss coz of the dyslexia but i think i done okay id really love to write another one but i havent a clue where to start...
Keep on doing what your doing im hooked!
1Shark-Kainwow im totally addicted to ur fanficts theyr fantastic!
i like ur style of writing too!
i like how you captured the relationship between kains sons
especially Zephon *how i love zephon lmao*
thank u btw for reviewing my story i am very greatful!
i thought writin the fanficts would be a total loss coz of the dyslexia but i think i done okay id really love to write another one but i havent a clue where to start...
Keep on doing what your doing im hooked!