for My Favorite Birthday Present
206/12/2007 c1 aw
OF COURSE ITS SHORT BECAUSE ALL STORYS ARE SHORT I LOVE STORYS THAT GO ON FOR YEARS ANYWAY IT IS AWESOME
OF COURSE ITS SHORT BECAUSE ALL STORYS ARE SHORT I LOVE STORYS THAT GO ON FOR YEARS ANYWAY IT IS AWESOME
12/25/2006 c1 JakeMiley4evr
Yes. You need to make it longer. There should be more detail.
Yes. You need to make it longer. There should be more detail.
12/21/2006 c1 IrockHARDERthanYOU
well i didnt particularly like it, but it was really good. did that make any sense at all? if it didnt just ignore it cause it was good. it REALLY hard to write a story in present tense but you pulled it off, and it had that whole climax/resolution/happy thing going on.
well i didnt particularly like it, but it was really good. did that make any sense at all? if it didnt just ignore it cause it was good. it REALLY hard to write a story in present tense but you pulled it off, and it had that whole climax/resolution/happy thing going on.
12/20/2006 c1 masochistic lion lover
it's a little short, but i LOVED it! nice job! update soon! i'm pretty excited about how this one will turn out! :)
it's a little short, but i LOVED it! nice job! update soon! i'm pretty excited about how this one will turn out! :)