12/23/2006 c1 4wingsxforxmarie
It was an okay fanfic. You should've made it longer, with more detail, and definintely not just a oneshot. You should continue with it and make it into an actualy story, turning it into what you think should've happened after he left her. But that's just my opinion. But for that being your first fanfic, you're actually pretty good at writing. But seriously, you really should consider continuing the story.

~roryxjess