for Bathroom Battles4/23/2008 c1 KandaLavi
You are really good at writing word batter, I hope you know. The standpipe comment was gold by the way! I liked the "Is Jorel sure I’m the last Kryptonian" comment the best.
You really are great at writing. :)
You are really good at writing word batter, I hope you know. The standpipe comment was gold by the way! I liked the "Is Jorel sure I’m the last Kryptonian" comment the best.
You really are great at writing. :)
10/10/2007 c1 
94svgurl410
that was so funny! i loved their freak out at using the same toothbrush. lois and clark till the end! you wrote them so well that i could actually see this scene in my head.
excellent fic! :)
94svgurl410that was so funny! i loved their freak out at using the same toothbrush. lois and clark till the end! you wrote them so well that i could actually see this scene in my head.
excellent fic! :)
2/10/2007 c1 3jessicajason
That was very cute! I love the banter between Lois and Clark. She brings out a playfulness in him that is often sorely lacking. Well done!
3jessicajasonThat was very cute! I love the banter between Lois and Clark. She brings out a playfulness in him that is often sorely lacking. Well done!
12/28/2006 c1 lovestoread
LOL! that was hilarious, loved it!
LOL! that was hilarious, loved it!
12/28/2006 c1 30catie-writes-things
Aww, how cute! You did a great job, especially for your first fic. I look forward to seeing what you write in the future.
30catie-writes-thingsAww, how cute! You did a great job, especially for your first fic. I look forward to seeing what you write in the future.
12/25/2006 c1 lavron
all in all i think this a fair potrayal of my all time favourite tv show... well done i do appreciate thirst for this and from now on i am a true fan fictioner , following in your steps
all in all i think this a fair potrayal of my all time favourite tv show... well done i do appreciate thirst for this and from now on i am a true fan fictioner , following in your steps
12/25/2006 c1 90htbthomas
I dug myself out from under the piles of wrapping paper, and... see? Here I am!
This was hilarious! I loved the way you described their argument, down to the nonsensical way Lois talked with the brush in her mouth. And Lois' inspection of the two toothbrushes... very visual!
I snorted at: "this new step in their relationship" - LOL!
Great job, sweetie! More, please?
90htbthomasI dug myself out from under the piles of wrapping paper, and... see? Here I am!
This was hilarious! I loved the way you described their argument, down to the nonsensical way Lois talked with the brush in her mouth. And Lois' inspection of the two toothbrushes... very visual!
I snorted at: "this new step in their relationship" - LOL!
Great job, sweetie! More, please?
12/25/2006 c1 20Sean Montgomery
Hee! This was so cute! And I'm not even the first to review! See, I knew you could do it! *nudges you*
20Sean MontgomeryHee! This was so cute! And I'm not even the first to review! See, I knew you could do it! *nudges you*
12/24/2006 c1 71truelove
LOL
Very cute. I could see that happening in SV very easily. I could only imagine the thoughts going through Martha's head. She's caught them in that bathroom twice now and both times Clark was barely dressed.
My favorite part was how Clark wondered if Lois was Kryptonian too. Very cute one-shot.
71trueloveLOL
Very cute. I could see that happening in SV very easily. I could only imagine the thoughts going through Martha's head. She's caught them in that bathroom twice now and both times Clark was barely dressed.
My favorite part was how Clark wondered if Lois was Kryptonian too. Very cute one-shot.