for The Unsung Song of the Phantom of the Opera12/6/2013 c1 Phanma
This was wonderful. I enjoyed reading this very much! You are very skillful in your writing.
"Building, building, building ... notes thrust ... straining for release" lol, I almost blushed reading that! Thought you were going to exceed the T rating.
This was wonderful. I enjoyed reading this very much! You are very skillful in your writing.
"Building, building, building ... notes thrust ... straining for release" lol, I almost blushed reading that! Thought you were going to exceed the T rating.
6/30/2008 c1 Kat
Thanks for the insight of Erik's mind. Fascinating... Great Job! ^^
Thanks for the insight of Erik's mind. Fascinating... Great Job! ^^
12/31/2006 c1 schizosophia
"She was completely trance-like as we plunged into the darkness of the lake. The music we sang to each other on that boat was hypnotizing in its seductivity, music that makes your eyes roll back in your head with pleasure. Music that intoxicates your blood and makes you feel a pleasure of drugged intensity. The deeper we got, the closer to my cavern, the more frenetic our music became. Christine’s vocalizing took on a hunted quality, strung with sadness and with an undertone of panic, ever-hinting at nightmare that terrifies, yet is woken from reluctantly. Building, building, building, her notes thrust always higher, straining for the release only I could relinquish to her voice."
intoxicatingly written. i enjoyed this fic immensely. your portrayal of ALW's Erik was perfect. good luck in the Scholastic writing contest! =)
best of luck, briana
"She was completely trance-like as we plunged into the darkness of the lake. The music we sang to each other on that boat was hypnotizing in its seductivity, music that makes your eyes roll back in your head with pleasure. Music that intoxicates your blood and makes you feel a pleasure of drugged intensity. The deeper we got, the closer to my cavern, the more frenetic our music became. Christine’s vocalizing took on a hunted quality, strung with sadness and with an undertone of panic, ever-hinting at nightmare that terrifies, yet is woken from reluctantly. Building, building, building, her notes thrust always higher, straining for the release only I could relinquish to her voice."
intoxicatingly written. i enjoyed this fic immensely. your portrayal of ALW's Erik was perfect. good luck in the Scholastic writing contest! =)
best of luck, briana