
8/20/2012 c3 Pokecidra
WOW
WOW
4/13/2008 c3 Yoshi Yamakaze
It's a nice story but I can't take the feeling that it's not finish, maybe a sequel prehaps or a continuation.
It's a nice story but I can't take the feeling that it's not finish, maybe a sequel prehaps or a continuation.
2/13/2008 c3 mwc01
This is a good story, and I hope you pick back up and continue this, because this isn't a way to end any story.
This is a good story, and I hope you pick back up and continue this, because this isn't a way to end any story.
9/14/2007 c3 Tyler T
Hey Serpo15,
This is a cool story! It goes into more detail about the cursing abilities of a ninetails, which is rare. It also gives me so many questions. Are the 3 markings on each side of natan's face supposed to be like the 6 tails of a vulpix? Also, what is the marking accross his forehead? Is it it supposed to be that curly thing on top of a vulpix's head? What is it's signifigance. Since he becomes more vulpixish every time he uses his power, will his outside appearance start to change? his personality? or maybe something else entirely. Anyways, since you haven't updated this story since April I'm assuming you've abandoned it. Personally I would like to see it picked back up. Especially with the enigmatic kind of transformation this is. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Tyler T the pikafan
Hey Serpo15,
This is a cool story! It goes into more detail about the cursing abilities of a ninetails, which is rare. It also gives me so many questions. Are the 3 markings on each side of natan's face supposed to be like the 6 tails of a vulpix? Also, what is the marking accross his forehead? Is it it supposed to be that curly thing on top of a vulpix's head? What is it's signifigance. Since he becomes more vulpixish every time he uses his power, will his outside appearance start to change? his personality? or maybe something else entirely. Anyways, since you haven't updated this story since April I'm assuming you've abandoned it. Personally I would like to see it picked back up. Especially with the enigmatic kind of transformation this is. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Tyler T the pikafan
9/14/2007 c3 zyperis
This chapter is the end? That's like ending with a cliffhangar! You should write more about what happens after they escape the pack.
This chapter is the end? That's like ending with a cliffhangar! You should write more about what happens after they escape the pack.
8/2/2007 c3
4Jolteon Master
I like it you need to finish it I'd really like to see what happens to Nathan and don't tell me it's complete because there is no way a story this good is complete don't let it end like Werepokeism.

I like it you need to finish it I'd really like to see what happens to Nathan and don't tell me it's complete because there is no way a story this good is complete don't let it end like Werepokeism.
6/26/2007 c3 Anonymous
COMPLETE? You must continue the story! Its too good to be finished! Really, too many questions and stuff.
COMPLETE? You must continue the story! Its too good to be finished! Really, too many questions and stuff.
2/27/2007 c1 SmashQueen
Cool. This is a first: Kid transformed into a Pokemon. I kinda grew outta Pokemon but this got me right back in. Maybe I'll actually start my 'sucked in' fanfic for Pokemon finally. ...Though probably not. Between that, Tossed in Space, and Sly as a Cooper I wouldn't have time.
I'll look for an update!
Cool. This is a first: Kid transformed into a Pokemon. I kinda grew outta Pokemon but this got me right back in. Maybe I'll actually start my 'sucked in' fanfic for Pokemon finally. ...Though probably not. Between that, Tossed in Space, and Sly as a Cooper I wouldn't have time.
I'll look for an update!