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2/8/2013 c1 wesker-strikes-agian
Love the way you rhymed it! The 'shadowed by trees' line is perfect!
9/7/2007 c1 RANDOMGIRL
I must atmit i dont normaly like poem fics but this 1 is preety good
2/18/2007 c1 2Balance in the Dark
i have to say that i don't read a lot of poetry because it's poorly written most times, but i liked this. i really like poems that rhyme and make since without going crazy with the words.

i haven't read any of your stuff but i was looking of some of the stuff Van Gordon has written/said and thought to look you up i am going to start reading 'cuts and bruies' shortly. And if this is what you have to offer i'm looking forward to it.
1/8/2007 c1 meriem
wow really good.. i love the rhyming scheme... and the way u made it sound soo intresting.. i mean wen u think about it slade chasin robin is sorta borin but the way u pu it it's amazing... KEEP ON WRITING
1/7/2007 c1 chocofusion
rythmes and flows nicely and sounds like dr. suess...a good toilet read when ur constipated
1/7/2007 c1 16Alexnandru Van Gordon
Hey-I like that! Usually I stray away from poetry because so many people utterly butcher their work (*sigh*), but you pulled this off magnificently:

"...For devil lives in burdened guilt,

Hope fades awat and begins to wilt..."

Heh-loved those lines the most for some reason. Keep writing. I updated ;P

-Standing ovation

-Alexnandru Van Gordon
1/5/2007 c1 hikaru
that was an awsome poem! greatest poem i ever read!:D
1/5/2007 c1 3Azulcat
WOW! that was GOOD! you are SO good at poetry. wow, im really impressed.

"For devil lives in burdened guilt,

Hope fades away and begins to wilt"

those were my favorite lines. nice work!

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