for Dependence12/19/2008 c1 
70Whirlwind421
My first reaction: I hate Martha! This is the horriblest fic ever! And when I say horrible I mean really really really really really good but makes me what to cry my head off! Second reaction: (Mainly the reaction at the end of the fic!) It's bittersweet! It's so sad! But, It's got a positive ending!
I was just starting to like Martha...Oh Well...I can't believe you made the Doctor never mention her! *sigh* Rose became Sarah Jane! (In the beginning, I didn't like Sarah Jane, but then I watched School Reunion and now I'm watching the Sarah Jane Adventures...Really good show...and now I like her!) Don't mind the rambling!
I really liked the ending! Great job with the writing and idea! I really really really really liked it!
70Whirlwind421My first reaction: I hate Martha! This is the horriblest fic ever! And when I say horrible I mean really really really really really good but makes me what to cry my head off! Second reaction: (Mainly the reaction at the end of the fic!) It's bittersweet! It's so sad! But, It's got a positive ending!
I was just starting to like Martha...Oh Well...I can't believe you made the Doctor never mention her! *sigh* Rose became Sarah Jane! (In the beginning, I didn't like Sarah Jane, but then I watched School Reunion and now I'm watching the Sarah Jane Adventures...Really good show...and now I like her!) Don't mind the rambling!
I really liked the ending! Great job with the writing and idea! I really really really really liked it!
7/5/2008 c1 40A Gentleman Of Leisure
Excellent, ingenious, very touching. I enjoyed that a lot. I hope you write a sequel some time.
AGOL
40A Gentleman Of LeisureExcellent, ingenious, very touching. I enjoyed that a lot. I hope you write a sequel some time.
AGOL
1/23/2007 c1 peppaoceangal
to lazy to sign in!
k that was great
i really mean it i couldnt pick out anything wrong!
to lazy to sign in!
k that was great
i really mean it i couldnt pick out anything wrong!
1/13/2007 c1 141montypython203
Really good, just one question: what's Rose on about, saying the Doctor left her? Is she in the parallel universe? It's just a bit unclear.
141montypython203Really good, just one question: what's Rose on about, saying the Doctor left her? Is she in the parallel universe? It's just a bit unclear.
1/9/2007 c1 2Serina Kat
VERY nice.
But, uh...
“Since when,” he asked suspiciously, “Did you have a heart on your left side?”
People have ALWAYS had hearts on their left sides. I think the Doctor meant to say "right side."
2Serina KatVERY nice.
But, uh...
“Since when,” he asked suspiciously, “Did you have a heart on your left side?”
People have ALWAYS had hearts on their left sides. I think the Doctor meant to say "right side."
1/7/2007 c1 15RngrThorne
Very nice. Although I'm not sure how Rose got there. Her meeting with the Doctor seemed like something that could really happen to someone who travels with such 'advanced' company.
15RngrThorneVery nice. Although I'm not sure how Rose got there. Her meeting with the Doctor seemed like something that could really happen to someone who travels with such 'advanced' company.
1/7/2007 c1 Cirana
gd fic
gd fic
1/7/2007 c1 3Unikorn
I'm duly impressed. I like the premise of your story, actually having thought it for myself just recently but I'm glad you got it written down. You show a lot of potential. Keep writing.
3UnikornI'm duly impressed. I like the premise of your story, actually having thought it for myself just recently but I'm glad you got it written down. You show a lot of potential. Keep writing.
1/7/2007 c1 2Cadi The Canadian
aw... but I have 2 questions:
1) How did the Doctor get there?
2) Will Rose regenerate, since she's a Time Lady? Or is she only part Time Lady?
I love your story! :D
~Cadi!
2Cadi The Canadianaw... but I have 2 questions:
1) How did the Doctor get there?
2) Will Rose regenerate, since she's a Time Lady? Or is she only part Time Lady?
I love your story! :D
~Cadi!