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1/19/2013 c2 13FF's Nightmare
Have Sakura break up with Sasuke. Sakura tries to get together with Naruto. Naruto told her "Once a Traitor's girlfriend and always be one."
Sakura should asked, "Naruto-Kun what do I have to do to prove my love for you?"
Naruto smirked and replied, "Killed Sasuke,Kakashi, Tsunade, Shizune, the Rest of the Rookie 8 (beside you and me of course) and the Civilian Council. That's the only way for you to prove your love to me."

Have Sasuke decide not to revive his clan until Naruto becomes Hokage. Naruto tell the council that he'll NEVER will be Hokage cause a Traitor sat in the once honorable spot. Kakashi was force into being Hokage cause Tsunade refused to come back after they crush her little brother's dream.

Fifth Kazekage, Fifth Mizukage, Third Tsuchikage and the Fourth Raikage offer him there spots if Naruto join their village. The other Kages doesn't trust the Sixth Hokage. Neither does the other three Kages. They said, "If one Konoha Genin would be in the Chunin Exams. We will killed them. We'll never have Konoha host the Chunin Exams again."
1/10/2013 c5 7Jenavive RoseThorne Gemstone
MAKE IT NARUHINA :D SAKURA'S TAKEN SO GIVE HER A CHANCE :3
1/4/2013 c5 LoLi15
i thought this fic was suppose to be updated 6yrs ago.. Man! For the first time i'm reading naruto with this character. It broke my heart really.. ;(
i just want naruto to kill that sasuke teme..
10/4/2012 c5 13FF's Nightmare
UPDATE SOON.
9/2/2012 c4 1Diamondstar the Seeker
Fuck you, Sasgay! I hope you die a painful death along with those who hurt Naruto!
8/14/2012 c1 13FF's Nightmare
Have Sakura break up with Sasuke. Sakura tries to get together with Naruto. Naruto told her "Once a Traitor's girlfriend and always be one."
Sakura should asked, "Naruto-Kun what do I have to do to prove my love for you?"
Naruto smirked and replied, "Killed Sasuke,Kakashi, Tsunade, Shizune, the Rest of the Rookie 8 (beside you and me of course) and the Civilian Council. That's the only way for you to prove your love to me."
4/19/2012 c5 OX-11
good story hope he kills them all XD!
4/4/2012 c5 1Diamondstar the Seeker
NARUTO, KILL THEM! THEY DON'T DESRVER YOUR FORGIVENS, KILL THEM MAKE THEM SUFFER THE SOME WAY THEY DID TO YOU!
5/9/2011 c5 kenosuppur
when are you finishing this story
11/4/2010 c3 ssgohan79
Nice touch. Hope the next chapter comes up soon.
9/26/2009 c5 darkjedi35
i like where this story is going. how does it end? please finish this story
1/2/2009 c5 Ice Crown
Hey, i just had a thought, i watched a warcraft ending when arthas became the lich king.

I get a special feeling when i watch him sitting on the frozen throne completely alone and evil...

Suggestion, you could make naruto into a similar evil, And im a narusaku fan so i would ask if you could get both sakura and sasuke in a spot where they both get more and more hated, to say it the easy way, they get exactly what naruto said they would get for utterly destroying everything he ever had and was...

I know, Naruto learns a special spell from the kyuubi that transferes all his emotional pain or all his physical pain...

Too people that he chooses, sakura gets forced too feel absolutely all of naruto's mental and emotional pain...

While Sasuke Gets absolutely all the physical pain he ever endured... wich maybe lead him to his death...

This is all naruto's revenge im talking about here...

All this is just suggestions, and some opinions of course. Im a huge narusaku fan so its quite obvious what i think.
5/28/2008 c5 3Kio 'Key-Oh
Awsome story. Sorry to hear bout the accident. Please post the next chapter soon.
5/18/2008 c1 ssgohan79
it's a good story hope update soon
3/30/2008 c5 46Animaman
Nice touch. Hope the next chapter comes up soon.
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