for Family Ties10/24/2009 c5 
61ArwenMUC
I must say that this is a very unique story...but it's weird to think of the Doctor being Rose's father
61ArwenMUCI must say that this is a very unique story...but it's weird to think of the Doctor being Rose's father
3/22/2008 c2 86just drifting
well that was a bit sudden. its like dum di dum di dum oh and Rose i'm your father
86just driftingwell that was a bit sudden. its like dum di dum di dum oh and Rose i'm your father
5/7/2007 c4 4NonExistente
Wow. This is just... this is just odd... a good odd but... wow... first story of it's kind I've read. Ooh... update? Still not sure on it, but its really really well written. It's... got me hooked. I'm curious
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4NonExistenteWow. This is just... this is just odd... a good odd but... wow... first story of it's kind I've read. Ooh... update? Still not sure on it, but its really really well written. It's... got me hooked. I'm curious
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4/7/2007 c4 grumpygrim
ace :p update soon!
ace :p update soon!
2/17/2007 c4 4Seiya's Star
Oh Wow! How exciting! And some really good questions and issues too! What a situation to be in, to fall in love with your daughter as you are gradually starting to realize she is your daughter. And to fall in love with your dad not knowing its your dad! That has got to be a horribly intolerable situation to be in! I can't wait to see what all you do with this fascinating story line! Bravo for the brilliant creativity!
4Seiya's StarOh Wow! How exciting! And some really good questions and issues too! What a situation to be in, to fall in love with your daughter as you are gradually starting to realize she is your daughter. And to fall in love with your dad not knowing its your dad! That has got to be a horribly intolerable situation to be in! I can't wait to see what all you do with this fascinating story line! Bravo for the brilliant creativity!
2/12/2007 c3 Torchwood.2007
I loved chapter 3 - I thoroughly enjoyed it - great storyline so far - fantastic - please update soon!
I loved chapter 3 - I thoroughly enjoyed it - great storyline so far - fantastic - please update soon!
2/10/2007 c3 141montypython203
Okay, the explanation made it all add up. It's getting really interesting :)
141montypython203Okay, the explanation made it all add up. It's getting really interesting :)
2/10/2007 c3 4Seiya's Star
Oh Good Good story! Definately non-conventional! Makes you wonder what will happen next! daughter... would have never expected that... But I like it, I like it alot!
Can't wait to see what you will do with this story next!
I usually write more complex reviews, but I'm tired, and this is good, so I'm content with just telling you I really enjoyed your "twisty" story!
Keep writting new chapters!
-Rasciana
4Seiya's StarOh Good Good story! Definately non-conventional! Makes you wonder what will happen next! daughter... would have never expected that... But I like it, I like it alot!
Can't wait to see what you will do with this story next!
I usually write more complex reviews, but I'm tired, and this is good, so I'm content with just telling you I really enjoyed your "twisty" story!
Keep writting new chapters!
-Rasciana
2/10/2007 c3 Anonymouse
This is a good story. I'm sure tales about the Doctor and Rose being related have been used a lot, but yours was unique and a good read. A way to add more depth to the characters is to let us see into their mind even more, which might help us understand the choices they make. Be careful that this story doesn't turn gruesome or gory on the subjects of the Time War or Daleks though. Great work, and I can't wait to read your next chapter. -Dizzy Dalek
This is a good story. I'm sure tales about the Doctor and Rose being related have been used a lot, but yours was unique and a good read. A way to add more depth to the characters is to let us see into their mind even more, which might help us understand the choices they make. Be careful that this story doesn't turn gruesome or gory on the subjects of the Time War or Daleks though. Great work, and I can't wait to read your next chapter. -Dizzy Dalek
1/30/2007 c2 2vanessadeanne
Not sure where you are going with this. There is too much romance in cannon for him to really be her father, but it's an interesting concept so I'd like to see where you take it.
2vanessadeanneNot sure where you are going with this. There is too much romance in cannon for him to really be her father, but it's an interesting concept so I'd like to see where you take it.
1/24/2007 c2 3LadyOfIron
I loved it! The twist at the end is really interesting - I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! Fantastic!
3LadyOfIronI loved it! The twist at the end is really interesting - I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! Fantastic!
1/16/2007 c2 141montypython203
Oh. My. God. That's so ... weird! It'll be interesting to see how this pans out.
141montypython203Oh. My. God. That's so ... weird! It'll be interesting to see how this pans out.