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12/15/2007 c1 Roch0ester
That's the first fic I read about Sirius and the day he ran away. I love how you portrayed him to have problems of his own- you know, not just the arrogant bastard Rowling portrays him as. As usual, GREAT WORK! You really have this thing that makes the readers have this huge emotional attack after reading your fics. You evoke so much emotion...**sobs** Great work!
1/10/2007 c1 12Narcissa B Malfoy
Brilliant work as usual, Bella!

However, the only thing I agree with 'The Regan' on is that you should keep writing! And there's no "might as well" about it!

You have effectivly captured the emotions that Sirius would have been experiencing. Relief over leaving his family, yet regret. Great work! Keep it up!

It's perfect for a drabble!

~ Narcissa B Malfoy ~
1/10/2007 c1 The Regan

It's fine for a drabble. You at least knew what you were talking about and had an intelligent writing style. Harry Potter is awful, but at least you didn't make it shit. You might as well write more things.

All in all,


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