for Be Careful5/24/2007 c5 
7iwritefiction
Great story! i love it. if you need more inspiration/med. info, i just finished reading this great book on a girl with cancer(lymphoma). its called Side Effects and its by amy goldman koss.
7iwritefictionGreat story! i love it. if you need more inspiration/med. info, i just finished reading this great book on a girl with cancer(lymphoma). its called Side Effects and its by amy goldman koss.
5/15/2007 c2 henrybass
Cool, but one thing... You could leave a space (Enter) when someone different talks, its quite hard to read.
On to next Chapter...
Love Yah, Toodles x
~Bethany.
Cool, but one thing... You could leave a space (Enter) when someone different talks, its quite hard to read.
On to next Chapter...
Love Yah, Toodles x
~Bethany.
3/13/2007 c5 2Anelriel
Komo tana! Then revenge there shall be, tenfold! Dun dun dun! In any event, update shortly. May the Force be with you, always. ^_^
2AnelrielKomo tana! Then revenge there shall be, tenfold! Dun dun dun! In any event, update shortly. May the Force be with you, always. ^_^
2/1/2007 c5 muishie
its' really good. i like sharpays character in this, so messed up and all because its really little you get to see her in this state. keep writing and your story will be perfect.
as to answer your question, no lol, well not really at least, i don't drink as much now.
its' really good. i like sharpays character in this, so messed up and all because its really little you get to see her in this state. keep writing and your story will be perfect.
as to answer your question, no lol, well not really at least, i don't drink as much now.
2/1/2007 c2 muishie
it's a really good story and it has great description and such, just make sure that in some parts it sounds realistic. for example, i doubt as 10 year old would start drinking at that age.. the earliest I ever drank my first glass of alcohol was when I was 12...and then i got addicted so its kind of like Sharpay in your story. also, space out your paragraphs with a gap in between.
i really like the story, it has full potential. keep it up. x
it's a really good story and it has great description and such, just make sure that in some parts it sounds realistic. for example, i doubt as 10 year old would start drinking at that age.. the earliest I ever drank my first glass of alcohol was when I was 12...and then i got addicted so its kind of like Sharpay in your story. also, space out your paragraphs with a gap in between.
i really like the story, it has full potential. keep it up. x
2/1/2007 c5 32coco929292
please keep going i like it so far it's really good! Update soon!
:) Love
me
ZASHLEY ROXZ TROYPAY ROXZ 4EVER
32coco929292please keep going i like it so far it's really good! Update soon!
:) Love
me
ZASHLEY ROXZ TROYPAY ROXZ 4EVER
1/25/2007 c4 2Anelriel
Excellent! Very well done! It is to be commended. Forgive me for not reviewing more recently! I was unaware that this story was in my email account. I have read all you have thus far. You portray Sharpay in the best Ice Queen version I have seen yet. I trust Ry shall survive. He is the stronger one amongst them. Oh, my negligence! Ry "MUST" date someone! Preferably, Jason Cross. Onegai...heed my request! In any event, I have digressed overlong, I deem.
May the Force be with you in your endeavors. ^_^
2AnelrielExcellent! Very well done! It is to be commended. Forgive me for not reviewing more recently! I was unaware that this story was in my email account. I have read all you have thus far. You portray Sharpay in the best Ice Queen version I have seen yet. I trust Ry shall survive. He is the stronger one amongst them. Oh, my negligence! Ry "MUST" date someone! Preferably, Jason Cross. Onegai...heed my request! In any event, I have digressed overlong, I deem.
May the Force be with you in your endeavors. ^_^