for Never Would Have Guessed5/4/2007 c19 xo.paradise
wow
Now that was intense, but I absolutely loved it. That was definitly the best chapter yet. I love how we got to see the serious side of Lauren, instead of the crazy, happy side. I never would have expected Lauren to feel that way, so weak, when she seemed like such a strong person. We have seen a lot of how Sharika feels and a lot about her situation with her powers, and it's great to finally see the true Lauren, and how her powers are really affecting her.
Great job, update soon!
wow
Now that was intense, but I absolutely loved it. That was definitly the best chapter yet. I love how we got to see the serious side of Lauren, instead of the crazy, happy side. I never would have expected Lauren to feel that way, so weak, when she seemed like such a strong person. We have seen a lot of how Sharika feels and a lot about her situation with her powers, and it's great to finally see the true Lauren, and how her powers are really affecting her.
Great job, update soon!
5/4/2007 c19 
13Marthienessx3
I am amazed by this story...
Honestly, its one of the best yet.
I am so excited for more.
13Marthienessx3I am amazed by this story...
Honestly, its one of the best yet.
I am so excited for more.
5/4/2007 c19 8AmesLuvsTheMetallicar
omg! this chapter was the best one yet! it was seriously amazing. I always love Lauren and Deans p.o.v's, and in this one i especially loved laurens. I seriously wanted to cry when she was talking about all the pain her empathy has caused her.
Update asap!
8AmesLuvsTheMetallicaromg! this chapter was the best one yet! it was seriously amazing. I always love Lauren and Deans p.o.v's, and in this one i especially loved laurens. I seriously wanted to cry when she was talking about all the pain her empathy has caused her.
Update asap!
5/3/2007 c2 12Mirajane Scarlet
Yay I get to see it from everyone's point of view!
And wedding rings, violence, and transgender clothing, oh my! lol. Absoluetly frickin loved it. And, I did not know that Lauren's last name was McMartin. And, and, who writes Dean and who writes Sam?
12Mirajane ScarletYay I get to see it from everyone's point of view!
And wedding rings, violence, and transgender clothing, oh my! lol. Absoluetly frickin loved it. And, I did not know that Lauren's last name was McMartin. And, and, who writes Dean and who writes Sam?
5/3/2007 c1 Mirajane Scarlet
I guess Lauren ends up slugging Dean no matter what universe they meet in. lol. Wonderful.
I guess Lauren ends up slugging Dean no matter what universe they meet in. lol. Wonderful.
5/1/2007 c18 Neha
O I just want to kill David! Damn him!
Sam is the sweetest! I love the guy!
And we finally had some Dean/Lauren moments! But seriously those two need to step up their relationship!
Loved this chapter as always!
O I just want to kill David! Damn him!
Sam is the sweetest! I love the guy!
And we finally had some Dean/Lauren moments! But seriously those two need to step up their relationship!
Loved this chapter as always!
5/1/2007 c18 9Licensetocreep
OMG!
I kinda love you for this chappie
the whole Dean/Lauren exchange was priceless
and the ending with Sam and Sharika was so flufferly! It was just...nifty!
anywho, I've got work to do on Blue Moon.
And torturing a plot bunny with a one-shot fic.
Cant wait till the next update!
9LicensetocreepOMG!
I kinda love you for this chappie
the whole Dean/Lauren exchange was priceless
and the ending with Sam and Sharika was so flufferly! It was just...nifty!
anywho, I've got work to do on Blue Moon.
And torturing a plot bunny with a one-shot fic.
Cant wait till the next update!
5/1/2007 c18 Delsunhine86
hey, great storyline in this chapter. i want more, i have really gotten into this story, at first i started reading cause of pixc's brillance but now am hanging on every word and can't wait to see what happens next
love del
hey, great storyline in this chapter. i want more, i have really gotten into this story, at first i started reading cause of pixc's brillance but now am hanging on every word and can't wait to see what happens next
love del
5/1/2007 c18 Diva0789
omg wow...lauren is suddenly bery dirrty minded...ima steal that for the next time i see a hot guy, moan-worthy...lol...never heard thatone before...but im a hermit so ill proanly never use it...lol..anywhos...see you soon with the next chappter i mean..im not a stalker...IM NOT!...i swear...um..yeah...ima go now...*walks away quickly with head down, embarassed*...:)
omg wow...lauren is suddenly bery dirrty minded...ima steal that for the next time i see a hot guy, moan-worthy...lol...never heard thatone before...but im a hermit so ill proanly never use it...lol..anywhos...see you soon with the next chappter i mean..im not a stalker...IM NOT!...i swear...um..yeah...ima go now...*walks away quickly with head down, embarassed*...:)
5/1/2007 c17 Janice
Love your story! It's soo funny! UPDATE YOUR STORY! I thought that you updated every week, I want to know what happens next *impatient*!
Love your story! It's soo funny! UPDATE YOUR STORY! I thought that you updated every week, I want to know what happens next *impatient*!
4/22/2007 c17 Neha
HAHAHAHAHA! OMG! That last bit with the senior citizens hitting Dean! LOL! I laughed right out of my seat! That was hilarious! I could actually picture the whole thing! lol! Nice work!
And I absolutely loved this line- Sam, on the other hand, found the ceiling more to his taste – probably because it’s closer to his head.
That was so funny!
I loved this chapter! And Dean and Lauren are hilarious together! I hope there's some more of that in the future chapters and maybe some love happening between them.
HAHAHAHAHA! OMG! That last bit with the senior citizens hitting Dean! LOL! I laughed right out of my seat! That was hilarious! I could actually picture the whole thing! lol! Nice work!
And I absolutely loved this line- Sam, on the other hand, found the ceiling more to his taste – probably because it’s closer to his head.
That was so funny!
I loved this chapter! And Dean and Lauren are hilarious together! I hope there's some more of that in the future chapters and maybe some love happening between them.
4/22/2007 c17 Licensetocreep
OH MY GODS!
I love the Harry Potter spell reference
and as a total Charmed fan and Wiccan, yes, a lot of that stuff is based on actual spell work
and PARANORMAL?
and JARED PADALECKI?...and Sams "WTF?" face
I kinda love you for that
in a total oh-my-god-best-writer-ever way
and the super strong old ladies and just, everything in this chapter. Perfectly perfect!
cant wait to see what happens in the next update!
OH MY GODS!
I love the Harry Potter spell reference
and as a total Charmed fan and Wiccan, yes, a lot of that stuff is based on actual spell work
and PARANORMAL?
and JARED PADALECKI?...and Sams "WTF?" face
I kinda love you for that
in a total oh-my-god-best-writer-ever way
and the super strong old ladies and just, everything in this chapter. Perfectly perfect!
cant wait to see what happens in the next update!
4/22/2007 c17 materialgirl40
omg...haha...i luved it...so much humor in this chapter!...update soon please
omg...haha...i luved it...so much humor in this chapter!...update soon please