for Never Would Have Guessed3/31/2007 c14 
9Licensetocreep
aww, poor Sammy
I've got a serious uhoh feeling about David too
the whole spidery thing makes my spider sense tingley
I absolutely love the Baywatch reference, and Laurens honesty about going to beaches! roflmao
can't wait till the next update!
9Licensetocreepaww, poor Sammy
I've got a serious uhoh feeling about David too
the whole spidery thing makes my spider sense tingley
I absolutely love the Baywatch reference, and Laurens honesty about going to beaches! roflmao
can't wait till the next update!
3/31/2007 c14 Diva0789
where did they go! on no...not kidnapped! that would suck! a lot!lol...cant wait for more!
where did they go! on no...not kidnapped! that would suck! a lot!lol...cant wait for more!
3/31/2007 c14 greyXowl
Yeps David seems a little bit creepy, I'm imagining the whole sleazy moustache like that guy in gone with the wind Lol
Anways another good chappie
Im still reading!
xoxo
fi
Yeps David seems a little bit creepy, I'm imagining the whole sleazy moustache like that guy in gone with the wind Lol
Anways another good chappie
Im still reading!
xoxo
fi
3/31/2007 c14 Neha
I feel so horrible for Sam! You are so mean, making him get all jealous and insecure and making David materialise out of nowhere. Oh btw, I already hate David. Something's not right about him.
And I feel terribly bad about Dean. So sad that he had to see Lauren go meet Kyle. Stupid Lauren! LOL!
Can't wait for your next update and hopefully Sam won't be too worried and Dean or Lauren would have done something about their attraction towards each other.
I feel so horrible for Sam! You are so mean, making him get all jealous and insecure and making David materialise out of nowhere. Oh btw, I already hate David. Something's not right about him.
And I feel terribly bad about Dean. So sad that he had to see Lauren go meet Kyle. Stupid Lauren! LOL!
Can't wait for your next update and hopefully Sam won't be too worried and Dean or Lauren would have done something about their attraction towards each other.
3/26/2007 c13 F-R-I-E-N-D-S
once again you have failed to give credit to the Friends writers who gave you the joke about all men thinking "Finally someone wants to have sex with me!"
once again you have failed to give credit to the Friends writers who gave you the joke about all men thinking "Finally someone wants to have sex with me!"
3/26/2007 c13 wouldnthaveaclue
Haha, that was great, loved the phone conversations, my family is EXACTLY like Sharika's, i kid you not. Besides the fact that i am not Bangali, but that was pretty scary. Sounds ALOT like my telephone conversations lol .
That was really well done. :) Keep it up
Haha, that was great, loved the phone conversations, my family is EXACTLY like Sharika's, i kid you not. Besides the fact that i am not Bangali, but that was pretty scary. Sounds ALOT like my telephone conversations lol .
That was really well done. :) Keep it up
3/24/2007 c13 19Transgenic-girl
Sam acting all cave-man-y and territorial made me laugh so hard. And I can soo imagine Dean's face as the girls are talking on their phones.
19Transgenic-girlSam acting all cave-man-y and territorial made me laugh so hard. And I can soo imagine Dean's face as the girls are talking on their phones.
3/23/2007 c1 9Licensetocreep
OH MY HEAVENLY GODDESS!
I have read all 12 chapters(I printed 13 to read in bed) and I am absolutely enthralled with this fanfic. Lauren reminds me so much of me it amazes me.
anyway, just wanted to show my love (I write fanfic, I know how much comments keep it going) and tell you to KEEP WRITING MORE!
anyway, I'm off
and I LOVE YOU BOTH! *glomp*
9LicensetocreepOH MY HEAVENLY GODDESS!
I have read all 12 chapters(I printed 13 to read in bed) and I am absolutely enthralled with this fanfic. Lauren reminds me so much of me it amazes me.
anyway, just wanted to show my love (I write fanfic, I know how much comments keep it going) and tell you to KEEP WRITING MORE!
anyway, I'm off
and I LOVE YOU BOTH! *glomp*
3/23/2007 c13 Neha
Oh wow you used Bengali lines! I understood what Sharika was saying cause I'm a Bengali myself!
And the title totally mislead me! LOL! Nicely done though! And Sam's insecurities were perfectly done!
Can't wait to see what happens at the beach! (eyebrows bobbing up and down lol)
Oh wow you used Bengali lines! I understood what Sharika was saying cause I'm a Bengali myself!
And the title totally mislead me! LOL! Nicely done though! And Sam's insecurities were perfectly done!
Can't wait to see what happens at the beach! (eyebrows bobbing up and down lol)
3/23/2007 c13 Diva0789
the ramblings of crazy people! lol. that was funny!, i was so hoping for sex in this chappy. from the title. but, it still funny!
the ramblings of crazy people! lol. that was funny!, i was so hoping for sex in this chappy. from the title. but, it still funny!
3/23/2007 c13 greyXowl
Lauren && Kira
Yet another kickass chapter!
I loved it!
mhmm I just wanted to review so you know that I am still reading the story!
that reminds me how come you && Kira dont talk bout it at school anymore?
Did I complain that much?
anyways Im outies
Lotsa love
xoxo
fi
Lauren && Kira
Yet another kickass chapter!
I loved it!
mhmm I just wanted to review so you know that I am still reading the story!
that reminds me how come you && Kira dont talk bout it at school anymore?
Did I complain that much?
anyways Im outies
Lotsa love
xoxo
fi
3/23/2007 c13 Delsunhine86
hey i love this chapter espically when the girls are on the phone with their parents, we all know that phone call of by heart.lol. love it, keep up the good work
del
hey i love this chapter espically when the girls are on the phone with their parents, we all know that phone call of by heart.lol. love it, keep up the good work
del
3/21/2007 c12 Friends fan
Stop stealing things from "Friends" unless you're going to disclaim it :P
And PLEASE tell us how to pronounce "Joyee"
Stop stealing things from "Friends" unless you're going to disclaim it :P
And PLEASE tell us how to pronounce "Joyee"
3/20/2007 c12 29Ty3
So, I stayed up until 5 AM yesterday reading your fanfic. I was too tired to review then, so I figured I'd do it now. The damn thing is addictive. I did not expect to get so wrapped up in it at all. I usually don't like fics that conveniently have two female hunters to match the boys, but your characters have real personality which makes them more fun. Plus, I love Dean and Lauren. I'm a nutcase, too, so it's fun to see someone else act as crazy (although maybe sometimes crazier) as I am. Please write more soon.
29Ty3So, I stayed up until 5 AM yesterday reading your fanfic. I was too tired to review then, so I figured I'd do it now. The damn thing is addictive. I did not expect to get so wrapped up in it at all. I usually don't like fics that conveniently have two female hunters to match the boys, but your characters have real personality which makes them more fun. Plus, I love Dean and Lauren. I'm a nutcase, too, so it's fun to see someone else act as crazy (although maybe sometimes crazier) as I am. Please write more soon.
3/19/2007 c12 Neha
I totally saw the lemonade thing coming...a particular episode of Friends helped me do that. LOL!
And Lauren's reaction to waking up next to Dean was just perfect! That's exactly how she would react and I loved her rant about being pregnant and stuff! Too HILARIOUS!
Can't wait for your next update!
I totally saw the lemonade thing coming...a particular episode of Friends helped me do that. LOL!
And Lauren's reaction to waking up next to Dean was just perfect! That's exactly how she would react and I loved her rant about being pregnant and stuff! Too HILARIOUS!
Can't wait for your next update!