
7/26/2010 c3
6dreaming of ravens at night
I just love those chance meetings with someone that will inevitably become someone important.

I just love those chance meetings with someone that will inevitably become someone important.
4/13/2009 c3
13Wandering-Recluse
And you ditch us right here? Come on, please update. This is an amazing start to a story and I really want to read more...please. I am on one knee begging you!

And you ditch us right here? Come on, please update. This is an amazing start to a story and I really want to read more...please. I am on one knee begging you!
7/23/2007 c3
4writing bird
... Interesting, it reminds me a bit of the movie Serendipity. Good plotline, so far. Good job! Update soon!

... Interesting, it reminds me a bit of the movie Serendipity. Good plotline, so far. Good job! Update soon!
7/11/2007 c3
2StarrySpark
Nice chapter. I liked Christine's attitude- very rebel-ish. Keep up the awesome work and update soon!

Nice chapter. I liked Christine's attitude- very rebel-ish. Keep up the awesome work and update soon!
7/11/2007 c3
3OceansAway
This story has a lot of pontenial.
But you have also jumped into the plot, without really describing anything.
I'm excited for the next chapter. Update soon!
~OceansAway

This story has a lot of pontenial.
But you have also jumped into the plot, without really describing anything.
I'm excited for the next chapter. Update soon!
~OceansAway
7/9/2007 c3 romanticfan
Stop! you are killing me. Now I see why you don't finished your stories, you go away ahead, no mystery, no suspense, no plot, no thinking... Slow down, and tell the story with details. Hope you take this the right way...
Stop! you are killing me. Now I see why you don't finished your stories, you go away ahead, no mystery, no suspense, no plot, no thinking... Slow down, and tell the story with details. Hope you take this the right way...
7/9/2007 c3 Froggle Boggle
I'm not usually one to like bad language, but the way you used it made it sound so cool. Yeah, Christine's character is wild, and I like it. Please continue with your story. Make it long, too.
Will Erik and Christine learn to love each other?
I'm not usually one to like bad language, but the way you used it made it sound so cool. Yeah, Christine's character is wild, and I like it. Please continue with your story. Make it long, too.
Will Erik and Christine learn to love each other?