for Lost Souls1/30/2023 c12 Guest
Just found this fic and I love it! I'm really looking forward to the next update soon! :)
Just found this fic and I love it! I'm really looking forward to the next update soon! :)
12/28/2011 c11 
2Ksmiley17
This was a good story! Please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
2Ksmiley17This was a good story! Please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
12/11/2009 c11 PianoxForte
*GASP* Uh-oh... I sure hope Goku doesn't go ape and kill poor Mari... Once again, this was an amazing chapter, and I will be in suspense until you update again. Haha... the thought of Oolong training is really funny.
*GASP* Uh-oh... I sure hope Goku doesn't go ape and kill poor Mari... Once again, this was an amazing chapter, and I will be in suspense until you update again. Haha... the thought of Oolong training is really funny.
11/30/2009 c11 heather
Yah! Update!
Please keep going!
I want to know what happens!
Any way you can update sooner/more frequently?
Yah! Update!
Please keep going!
I want to know what happens!
Any way you can update sooner/more frequently?
11/29/2009 c11 1ren-hatake
i was so happy when you updated. i seriously forgot this story but now i feel refreshed reading this chapter. i wonder how she's going to react with gokus transformation. i can't wait
1ren-hatakei was so happy when you updated. i seriously forgot this story but now i feel refreshed reading this chapter. i wonder how she's going to react with gokus transformation. i can't wait
10/20/2009 c10 ren-hatake
i love this story. i've noticed that you haven't updated in 5 months. please update it if you can.
i love this story. i've noticed that you haven't updated in 5 months. please update it if you can.
7/4/2009 c10 Writer-Person
That was another great chapter. For a minute there, I was afraid you were gonna have Goku go Oozaru on Mari. I also liked the little tidbit at the end. 'it didn't matter that the fish was burning...'
The fish was burning!
That was another great chapter. For a minute there, I was afraid you were gonna have Goku go Oozaru on Mari. I also liked the little tidbit at the end. 'it didn't matter that the fish was burning...'
The fish was burning!
11/30/2008 c9 writer-person
Wow! I hadn't even noticed that you had updated, but the story is as good as ever. I hope you continue with it soon! :]
Wow! I hadn't even noticed that you had updated, but the story is as good as ever. I hope you continue with it soon! :]
9/24/2008 c8 heather
R U STILL ALIVE! please continue!
R U STILL ALIVE! please continue!
10/9/2007 c8 Writer-Person
Nice chapter finale... Haha...I'm sure we all know what is to happen next. Both chapter updates were awesome. Chapter 7 was depressing though. Keep up the fantastic work! :]
Nice chapter finale... Haha...I'm sure we all know what is to happen next. Both chapter updates were awesome. Chapter 7 was depressing though. Keep up the fantastic work! :]
10/8/2007 c8 heather
I can guess cuz I looked it up. Goku is instantly healed and strength returned; whether or not his memory returns I don't know.
I can guess cuz I looked it up. Goku is instantly healed and strength returned; whether or not his memory returns I don't know.
10/8/2007 c8 jade
so...what exactly does this have do do with dragonball?
so...what exactly does this have do do with dragonball?
10/7/2007 c8 Xstarlight-dragonX
The next chapter is going to be hilarious. I doubt that the senzu will bring back his memories though. It wouldn't be a very interesting story if that happened, now would it.
The next chapter is going to be hilarious. I doubt that the senzu will bring back his memories though. It wouldn't be a very interesting story if that happened, now would it.