for Lynx2/21/2008 c3 alamodie
weird, but cool. is this still ongoing, or did it have a plot to begin with? either way, it was good while it lasted.
weird, but cool. is this still ongoing, or did it have a plot to begin with? either way, it was good while it lasted.
12/10/2007 c3 
13Angeliss
I really like this character... Very fleshed out. Someone who knows how to handle herself because that's all she's ever done. Which means she's going to have a real hard time trusting those around her, huh? My mind is already blinking through several possibilities that you might be thinking of. That's a good thing by the way, I don't think about the ones I don't like.
Update soon! You've got some talent under your belt, and you're a good writer. I want to see a lot more from you!
13AngelissI really like this character... Very fleshed out. Someone who knows how to handle herself because that's all she's ever done. Which means she's going to have a real hard time trusting those around her, huh? My mind is already blinking through several possibilities that you might be thinking of. That's a good thing by the way, I don't think about the ones I don't like.
Update soon! You've got some talent under your belt, and you're a good writer. I want to see a lot more from you!
11/22/2007 c3 14tlx0
This is interesting. I want to see where you go with this. I'm seeing a lot of parallels between Kat and Wolverine. I await the next chapter.
-Twi
14tlx0This is interesting. I want to see where you go with this. I'm seeing a lot of parallels between Kat and Wolverine. I await the next chapter.
-Twi
11/20/2007 c3 11laenamoradadeROGUE
hey,, she sounds too super, three abilities so far? and i feel that rogue and pyro were a bit ooc in this chapter. why so much emphasis on the dark clothing? we got it the first time.
great choice of songs, still.
11laenamoradadeROGUEhey,, she sounds too super, three abilities so far? and i feel that rogue and pyro were a bit ooc in this chapter. why so much emphasis on the dark clothing? we got it the first time.
great choice of songs, still.
10/20/2007 c3 1Mmmuffins
You reviewed my story, so I thought I'd check out yours. Really good from what I've read. Like the powers. I always find it hard to pick original powers, so this is great. Keep it up, update as soon as you can.
-Kate
1MmmuffinsYou reviewed my story, so I thought I'd check out yours. Really good from what I've read. Like the powers. I always find it hard to pick original powers, so this is great. Keep it up, update as soon as you can.
-Kate
9/30/2007 c3 3M. Iris Alicea
Hmm. Interesting, but does this story have a plot? Can we see it soon, please? John shouldn't be whiny at all, that's just awful. make him more serious now please.
ROF
3M. Iris AliceaHmm. Interesting, but does this story have a plot? Can we see it soon, please? John shouldn't be whiny at all, that's just awful. make him more serious now please.
ROF
9/28/2007 c3 2HellsAngel44
Hey, Another grat chapter. I love her attitude, her taste of music and fashion. That and her playing the guitar makes her a perfect charactor in my books. Looking foward to the next chapter.
C U then.
HellsAngel44 = )
2HellsAngel44Hey, Another grat chapter. I love her attitude, her taste of music and fashion. That and her playing the guitar makes her a perfect charactor in my books. Looking foward to the next chapter.
C U then.
HellsAngel44 = )
9/25/2007 c3 1Atis
hey, glad Kat's back. awesome job. i'm actually learning guitar... hey, were those two songs personal favs? MCR rocks! :D
1Atishey, glad Kat's back. awesome job. i'm actually learning guitar... hey, were those two songs personal favs? MCR rocks! :D
9/23/2007 c3 1Jinx of the 2nd Law
You write very well! Ok, howzat? LOL!
No, really, this chapter went nicely, I like when the OCs can kinda feel at home while retaining their angst, fear, anger and freshness. And I didn't see any overt misspells or grammar booboos...
So yay!
Thanks for the update, the story has great potential, as do you!
1Jinx of the 2nd LawYou write very well! Ok, howzat? LOL!
No, really, this chapter went nicely, I like when the OCs can kinda feel at home while retaining their angst, fear, anger and freshness. And I didn't see any overt misspells or grammar booboos...
So yay!
Thanks for the update, the story has great potential, as do you!
9/23/2007 c3 Creidimha-Agus-Dochas
Hey, i like the story..i had actually been thinking of writing one similar to this with a girl called lynx..haha you beat me! update soon
Hey, i like the story..i had actually been thinking of writing one similar to this with a girl called lynx..haha you beat me! update soon
6/22/2007 c2 2HellsAngel44
Hi again. Really enjoying your story. I like how you've added a bit of humor. Looking foward to the next chapter.
HellsAngel44 = )
2HellsAngel44Hi again. Really enjoying your story. I like how you've added a bit of humor. Looking foward to the next chapter.
HellsAngel44 = )