for Pretty Boy1/25/2007 c1 
7Violet Kefira
Hey darlin'. Cute story, really. The only nick I have with this is that it's a very overused plot line. Songfic, dream-turned-real fic, wishful thinking fic. It's all been done before. Original ideas are the ones that really make an impact on the fanfic world. Use ideas from tv shows, movies, or even your own life. The purpose is to make it yours, and not let any other influences stop you from making something beautiful and unique. Keep writing and improving!
~ Vi Ke
7Violet KefiraHey darlin'. Cute story, really. The only nick I have with this is that it's a very overused plot line. Songfic, dream-turned-real fic, wishful thinking fic. It's all been done before. Original ideas are the ones that really make an impact on the fanfic world. Use ideas from tv shows, movies, or even your own life. The purpose is to make it yours, and not let any other influences stop you from making something beautiful and unique. Keep writing and improving!
~ Vi Ke
1/17/2007 c1 True-2-Blues-4ever
hey i know this song. 4real! and it goes really well with the whole story u wrote. it was really great and sweet. i loved it and i still do.^_^
hey i know this song. 4real! and it goes really well with the whole story u wrote. it was really great and sweet. i loved it and i still do.^_^
1/16/2007 c1 40AlwaysxAddicted
that was pretty cute good job :) As for the song choice,I havent heard the song in a while. :)
40AlwaysxAddictedthat was pretty cute good job :) As for the song choice,I havent heard the song in a while. :)