for Final Fantasy The ED Connection4/3/2008 c12 
28Pikfan
(Sorry for spamming, but this is for a friend).
Could you read Kingdom Ed and review the story? It would be nice.
28Pikfan(Sorry for spamming, but this is for a friend).
Could you read Kingdom Ed and review the story? It would be nice.
12/3/2007 c1 6Mega Mario
Oh! Forgot to mention:
It's great that Tidus is still important, and he's not way in the background like ANOTHER parody. ** But we already know the story through Tidus's eyes. It ought to focus more on the Eds.
Anyway, I hope this can make the story better!
6Mega MarioOh! Forgot to mention:
It's great that Tidus is still important, and he's not way in the background like ANOTHER parody. ** But we already know the story through Tidus's eyes. It ought to focus more on the Eds.
Anyway, I hope this can make the story better!
12/3/2007 c11 Mega Mario
You know. This story would be better if most of the dialouge wasn't exactly the same as in the game. I just skipped past most of the chapter because of this. And a lot of the previous chapters, too. Just make up your own dialouge, borrowing from the game's script only when neccesary, and this story will be much better.
You know. This story would be better if most of the dialouge wasn't exactly the same as in the game. I just skipped past most of the chapter because of this. And a lot of the previous chapters, too. Just make up your own dialouge, borrowing from the game's script only when neccesary, and this story will be much better.
8/19/2007 c10 anonymous
Uh, yeah, I really like the story. It's funny and has a good plot, but there's someone named Redterror with a really similar story. The beginning is similar any way. It's kind of weird.
Uh, yeah, I really like the story. It's funny and has a good plot, but there's someone named Redterror with a really similar story. The beginning is similar any way. It's kind of weird.
5/12/2007 c6 6Angelic Gargoyle Artemis
I enjoyed this. Please write more soon. Heh. Edd with a rifle is funny. I like it.
6Angelic Gargoyle ArtemisI enjoyed this. Please write more soon. Heh. Edd with a rifle is funny. I like it.
5/11/2007 c6 18YukiMizuno
Wow, nice chapter as always! I can't wait to read more... makes me wonder which Ed will get into the battle with the water boss that'll come up.
And I also like the idea that Wakka doesn't like Double D's weapon. It goes along with the plot that he doesn't like the Al Bhed. Excellent job!
18YukiMizunoWow, nice chapter as always! I can't wait to read more... makes me wonder which Ed will get into the battle with the water boss that'll come up.
And I also like the idea that Wakka doesn't like Double D's weapon. It goes along with the plot that he doesn't like the Al Bhed. Excellent job!
5/4/2007 c5 YukiMizuno
Wow, this is incredibly funny to me! I'm really enjoying this story. Please update whenever you're finished typing the other chapters! =) And I can't wait to see Ed's reaction to Chocobos!
Ed: More big chickens? ^_^ Let me pet!
XD
Wow, this is incredibly funny to me! I'm really enjoying this story. Please update whenever you're finished typing the other chapters! =) And I can't wait to see Ed's reaction to Chocobos!
Ed: More big chickens? ^_^ Let me pet!
XD
5/3/2007 c5 6Mega Mario
Gettin' good. Update ASAP! Hmm, I wonder how Wakka will react to Double D's rifle?
6Mega MarioGettin' good. Update ASAP! Hmm, I wonder how Wakka will react to Double D's rifle?
5/2/2007 c1 2Retchaka
Interesting story...however, people are not allowed to vote for a story's storyline. Copied from Guidelines:
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2RetchakaInteresting story...however, people are not allowed to vote for a story's storyline. Copied from Guidelines:
Entries not allowed:
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
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5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
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