
12/18/2008 c1
70Whirlwind421
I love it! Love love love love LOVE it! Awesome! I totally love the name you chose for him! It's perfect! It's reall well written and the quotes in the end gave it a really good effect!

I love it! Love love love love LOVE it! Awesome! I totally love the name you chose for him! It's perfect! It's reall well written and the quotes in the end gave it a really good effect!
1/24/2007 c1
141montypython203
That was really moving. It brought tears to my eyes. I have to say though, the "General" genre was a bit misleading. Other than that, good job :)

That was really moving. It brought tears to my eyes. I have to say though, the "General" genre was a bit misleading. Other than that, good job :)
1/23/2007 c1 Accountpurged12345
Woah. Very interesting. Great idea, very well-executed, and heart-breakingly sad at the end.
Woah. Very interesting. Great idea, very well-executed, and heart-breakingly sad at the end.