for Here Our Paths May Diverge1/20/2008 c5 Janiqua
Poor Daniel.
Poor Daniel.
9/3/2007 c11 cirana
gd fic
gd fic
7/11/2007 c1 CindyLou13
I really enjoyed the story. This showed Vala's honesty and bravery well. Would like to have seen more Daniel/Vala romance. Would be great if you continued the story with a sequel.
Thanks so much for writing!
I really enjoyed the story. This showed Vala's honesty and bravery well. Would like to have seen more Daniel/Vala romance. Would be great if you continued the story with a sequel.
Thanks so much for writing!
2/21/2007 c11 
8Athlantis
no no no no no!
Tomin's dead, you killed Tomin!
I need a tissue!,
I love what he said to Vala, about him giving up ascension for her.
And Vala telling him she'd make him breakfast and all that line, OMG so sad!
thank you so so much for sharing
8Athlantisno no no no no!
Tomin's dead, you killed Tomin!
I need a tissue!,
I love what he said to Vala, about him giving up ascension for her.
And Vala telling him she'd make him breakfast and all that line, OMG so sad!
thank you so so much for sharing
2/19/2007 c11 19Myosotis13
(can't believe I almost couldn't review because the site was too busy to accept new connections!Don't they know this is IMPORTANT!*grins*)
This must have been my favorite chapter, it was so emotionally intense, and so involving, and sad but wonderful at the same time. The way you depicted the Vala/Tomin interaction was extraordinary, I enjoyed their scenes a lot. Now...
*puts pitchfork away for a second, to make typing easier*
You were saying something about a sequel?
To be honest, I can see why you wouldn't want to change the ending. It was very good and made a lot of sense in context...I for one would like to see what Vala will say to Daniel in the aftermath of this battle.
Wonderful story, thank you so much for sharing!
Hugs,
Myosotis
19Myosotis13(can't believe I almost couldn't review because the site was too busy to accept new connections!Don't they know this is IMPORTANT!*grins*)
This must have been my favorite chapter, it was so emotionally intense, and so involving, and sad but wonderful at the same time. The way you depicted the Vala/Tomin interaction was extraordinary, I enjoyed their scenes a lot. Now...
*puts pitchfork away for a second, to make typing easier*
You were saying something about a sequel?
To be honest, I can see why you wouldn't want to change the ending. It was very good and made a lot of sense in context...I for one would like to see what Vala will say to Daniel in the aftermath of this battle.
Wonderful story, thank you so much for sharing!
Hugs,
Myosotis
2/19/2007 c10 Myosotis13
Yay! I'm so happy to see this updated...and what a wonderful feeling, to know that there's a resolution to this wonderful chapter just one mouse-click away :D. But I thought I'd review this one first...well, I love it, what else is there to say, as usual you've done a great job of making the scenes vivid and powerful, and got the characters down perfectly! And sorry to cut this review short, but I"m too anxious to see what the next chapter holds:D.
Yay! I'm so happy to see this updated...and what a wonderful feeling, to know that there's a resolution to this wonderful chapter just one mouse-click away :D. But I thought I'd review this one first...well, I love it, what else is there to say, as usual you've done a great job of making the scenes vivid and powerful, and got the characters down perfectly! And sorry to cut this review short, but I"m too anxious to see what the next chapter holds:D.
2/19/2007 c11 31HAZMOT
I can take the revenge ending by Vala, but what happened to Adria. You know she would come after her mother after such betrayal.
Well it's a thought. Anyway, great story. Yes the pitchforks are forthcoming but, hey, it's your story. :)
Can't wait until your next story.
31HAZMOTI can take the revenge ending by Vala, but what happened to Adria. You know she would come after her mother after such betrayal.
Well it's a thought. Anyway, great story. Yes the pitchforks are forthcoming but, hey, it's your story. :)
Can't wait until your next story.
2/19/2007 c11 dawn
man, you totally have to do an epi so that daniel can apologize for thinking she was against him, please!
man, you totally have to do an epi so that daniel can apologize for thinking she was against him, please!
2/3/2007 c9 melinda119
oh please another cliffhanger! you really know how to frustrate dont you next PLEASE pretty please
oh please another cliffhanger! you really know how to frustrate dont you next PLEASE pretty please
2/1/2007 c9 8Athlantis
damn! agaan with problems at reviewing!
anyway,
idiot! (Daniel!)
Vala was about to get them out and he had to act before listening!
please oh please update soon!
8Athlantisdamn! agaan with problems at reviewing!
anyway,
idiot! (Daniel!)
Vala was about to get them out and he had to act before listening!
please oh please update soon!
2/1/2007 c8 Athlantis
looks like the review I just wrote wasn't save.
Anyway
I wanted to say I love this chapter. I love the way you showed Vala's feelings towards Adria in a few words, lovely!
looks like the review I just wrote wasn't save.
Anyway
I wanted to say I love this chapter. I love the way you showed Vala's feelings towards Adria in a few words, lovely!
1/31/2007 c9 19Myosotis13
*sigh*
poor Vala...argh I could just *kill* Daniel, I truly, truly hope Adria doesn't realize what her mother did...ideally, Daniel would find out it was her who sent the message and get her back! (ah, who am I kidding, he'll never figure it out until it's too late:D) And I guess you're getting away with one more cliffy, but that's only because this is such a brilliant story! you can stop being evil anytime, though:D
(honestly, really, really great job on this, I love the plot and your style, and I think this would have made a great episode!)
Hugs,
Myosotis
19Myosotis13*sigh*
poor Vala...argh I could just *kill* Daniel, I truly, truly hope Adria doesn't realize what her mother did...ideally, Daniel would find out it was her who sent the message and get her back! (ah, who am I kidding, he'll never figure it out until it's too late:D) And I guess you're getting away with one more cliffy, but that's only because this is such a brilliant story! you can stop being evil anytime, though:D
(honestly, really, really great job on this, I love the plot and your style, and I think this would have made a great episode!)
Hugs,
Myosotis