for The Last Dragons3/25/2018 c18 Guest
Can we have a second part to this? With more solembum/caleb and a new evil? Could write about restoring the alliances among the factions to fight the new antagonist mixing in calebs life as an immortal and carvahall being rebuilt.
Can we have a second part to this? With more solembum/caleb and a new evil? Could write about restoring the alliances among the factions to fight the new antagonist mixing in calebs life as an immortal and carvahall being rebuilt.
6/26/2017 c12 Guest
Caleb would't have smiled at those Words from Glaedr, not after his confrontation with the elves, and epecially the queen. Well, at least in my opinion. In my mind, I can see him collapse completely, falling to his knees, tears pouring down his eyes at the acceptance he really hadn't expected, even if not from an elf, from an elfs dragon. He didn't expect it, couldn't even conceive the possibility and would have reacted strongly. I think. And would have explained his rather stonghanded ction against Oromis later. Still, just my take on the situation. Still a great story, even if I tend to pick at the details. Sorry (or not, since I actually posted it, but still in good meaning, loving the story!).
Caleb would't have smiled at those Words from Glaedr, not after his confrontation with the elves, and epecially the queen. Well, at least in my opinion. In my mind, I can see him collapse completely, falling to his knees, tears pouring down his eyes at the acceptance he really hadn't expected, even if not from an elf, from an elfs dragon. He didn't expect it, couldn't even conceive the possibility and would have reacted strongly. I think. And would have explained his rather stonghanded ction against Oromis later. Still, just my take on the situation. Still a great story, even if I tend to pick at the details. Sorry (or not, since I actually posted it, but still in good meaning, loving the story!).
6/24/2017 c14 Guest
Seriously. Whether I like Slash or not should not be an issue. You are the only one who deciedes how the story goes on. Do not allow others to decide; do it yourself. Personally, I love Slash, butthat should not influence your decition. Decide whatyou likeand go on from there. But make sure it is your decision, not other's decision. Good luck.
Seriously. Whether I like Slash or not should not be an issue. You are the only one who deciedes how the story goes on. Do not allow others to decide; do it yourself. Personally, I love Slash, butthat should not influence your decition. Decide whatyou likeand go on from there. But make sure it is your decision, not other's decision. Good luck.
6/24/2017 c13 Guest
Oh, my. You really know how to make men weep. Which I did reading Caleb's meeting with the elven queen. It was truly powerful. Well done!
Oh, my. You really know how to make men weep. Which I did reading Caleb's meeting with the elven queen. It was truly powerful. Well done!
6/24/2017 c12 Guest
Love the story. I cried at the end, and in my opinion, no epiphany can make the end of the chapter better. It was just perfect.
You have written a lot of Harry Potter crossovers, many wonderful stories, and in my mind, AS I read ths story, I picture HP dying at some point, and being reborn AS Caleb.
Just to point out, Lucus wasn't born, he was hatched.
Love the story. I cried at the end, and in my opinion, no epiphany can make the end of the chapter better. It was just perfect.
You have written a lot of Harry Potter crossovers, many wonderful stories, and in my mind, AS I read ths story, I picture HP dying at some point, and being reborn AS Caleb.
Just to point out, Lucus wasn't born, he was hatched.
3/5/2016 c18 reptoholic
Loved the story. Amazing work! I do look forward to reading more of your works. I have to say there is only about five inheritance stories that i liked, and this is definitely one of them.
Loved the story. Amazing work! I do look forward to reading more of your works. I have to say there is only about five inheritance stories that i liked, and this is definitely one of them.
3/4/2016 c12 reptoholic
LOL, love the ending to that chapter. The confrontations are very well written
LOL, love the ending to that chapter. The confrontations are very well written