for Long Lost Love9/7/2008 c8 
2luvnumb3rs
I am really a little scared to leave a review afraid I will be left hanging with yet another Author who is very talented but leaves their work unfinished. I hope you post again soon
2luvnumb3rsI am really a little scared to leave a review afraid I will be left hanging with yet another Author who is very talented but leaves their work unfinished. I hope you post again soon
8/3/2007 c7 Phoenix1992
Hey Ash, it's Bekah.
This is comin' along great! Although you shulda told me you had another chapter... lol. I will start working on the illustrations again ASAP. Keep it goin', it's awesome!
~Bekah~
Hey Ash, it's Bekah.
This is comin' along great! Although you shulda told me you had another chapter... lol. I will start working on the illustrations again ASAP. Keep it goin', it's awesome!
~Bekah~
7/16/2007 c7 245Little-Firestar84
no reviews! ehy, i only told you i liked the story, but it's still a review (well, not a so good one, but,well, i was under exams...)
But, still, i like yout story, and the characters, too. Sara is so sweet, never saw a sweeter child... i wanted to huge her! and Colby...i didn't like how he "finished" on the show, i think he had some pontential unexpress. Just to shock the audience (and the characters as well) you don't need soemone to be killed or a traitor. I like you vision of him very much... and can't wait to see the gangs babysit!
245Little-Firestar84no reviews! ehy, i only told you i liked the story, but it's still a review (well, not a so good one, but,well, i was under exams...)
But, still, i like yout story, and the characters, too. Sara is so sweet, never saw a sweeter child... i wanted to huge her! and Colby...i didn't like how he "finished" on the show, i think he had some pontential unexpress. Just to shock the audience (and the characters as well) you don't need soemone to be killed or a traitor. I like you vision of him very much... and can't wait to see the gangs babysit!
5/5/2007 c5 2luvnumb3rs
Maybe you should not post when your tired. Because thsi chapter was short an considering we only get achapter month it seems you could make it worth are time. But it was a good chapter.
2luvnumb3rsMaybe you should not post when your tired. Because thsi chapter was short an considering we only get achapter month it seems you could make it worth are time. But it was a good chapter.
3/22/2007 c3 luvnumb3rs
VERY NICE CHAPTER! A few spelling mistakes an some grammer but very nice. In one line you have walking downstairs an the out onto a balcony that is not possible. A balcony is usually on a second floor.
VERY NICE CHAPTER! A few spelling mistakes an some grammer but very nice. In one line you have walking downstairs an the out onto a balcony that is not possible. A balcony is usually on a second floor.
2/7/2007 c2 9the-belligerent-one
Brilliant. Really funny. loved it!
"don't wanna go to work tomorrow and tell everyone you died eating a cheeseburgur" - Pure genius!
9the-belligerent-oneBrilliant. Really funny. loved it!
"don't wanna go to work tomorrow and tell everyone you died eating a cheeseburgur" - Pure genius!
2/7/2007 c2 2luvnumb3rs
To diffcult to read just looking at gave me headache. But from what I did read it was good.
2luvnumb3rsTo diffcult to read just looking at gave me headache. But from what I did read it was good.
1/27/2007 c1 2luvnumb3rs
Very good concept. Layout sucked but what ever hope to see another chapter soon.
2luvnumb3rsVery good concept. Layout sucked but what ever hope to see another chapter soon.