for Life and Love1/20/2011 c4 DayDreamer077
oh dang! the babies question. I forgot about this. I'm rereading your fics.
oh dang! the babies question. I forgot about this. I'm rereading your fics.
12/17/2007 c7 
20Savior Emma Swan
Wow, my eyes are a little wet. Such a sweet ending. There were a few technical errors throughout each story in the trilogy, but otherwise, fantastic fics. So many children! I could barely keep everything strait!
20Savior Emma SwanWow, my eyes are a little wet. Such a sweet ending. There were a few technical errors throughout each story in the trilogy, but otherwise, fantastic fics. So many children! I could barely keep everything strait!
12/17/2007 c5 Savior Emma Swan
Wait a minute? Cameron is only 32? I mean, I know there's a bit of debate over her age in the fandom, but this fic takes place about 7 or 8 years after she started working for House, which makes her 24 or 25 when she started working for him, and she was definately older than that. Also, if House is 53 now, making their age difference 11 years, that would mean he was 35 or 36 when she started working for him, and I KNOW he was older than that. Other than your mistakes with the ages, the writing is cute and I'm enjoying the plot.
Wait a minute? Cameron is only 32? I mean, I know there's a bit of debate over her age in the fandom, but this fic takes place about 7 or 8 years after she started working for House, which makes her 24 or 25 when she started working for him, and she was definately older than that. Also, if House is 53 now, making their age difference 11 years, that would mean he was 35 or 36 when she started working for him, and I KNOW he was older than that. Other than your mistakes with the ages, the writing is cute and I'm enjoying the plot.
12/17/2007 c4 Savior Emma Swan
Aw, good for Amy and Tom! But hold on a second, I thought Amy called them at 2:30 AM, and then all of the sudden Lucy is asking about the wedding, and Greg is looking at the couple? What happened?
Aw, good for Amy and Tom! But hold on a second, I thought Amy called them at 2:30 AM, and then all of the sudden Lucy is asking about the wedding, and Greg is looking at the couple? What happened?
12/17/2007 c3 Savior Emma Swan
Well, I guess it was just my computer freaking out on me, sorry about bothering you with the PM. The reason I'm telling you this in a review for chapter three instead of chapter two is because the page was cut off and there was no review button at the bottom of the page. Just so you know, the kids wouldn't have been able to jump on House. Not only would he have stopped them, his leg would have been in unbearable pain.
Well, I guess it was just my computer freaking out on me, sorry about bothering you with the PM. The reason I'm telling you this in a review for chapter three instead of chapter two is because the page was cut off and there was no review button at the bottom of the page. Just so you know, the kids wouldn't have been able to jump on House. Not only would he have stopped them, his leg would have been in unbearable pain.
12/17/2007 c1 Savior Emma Swan
I like how you're continuing this story, but I have a question, as always. Are the twins two or three? In one paragraph you stated that they were two years old, and in the next you said that Ben recieved a gift for his third birthday, which was a few days earlier. If you want them talking the way that they are, I suggest having them be three years old. Their speech isn't believeable for two year olds.
I like how you're continuing this story, but I have a question, as always. Are the twins two or three? In one paragraph you stated that they were two years old, and in the next you said that Ben recieved a gift for his third birthday, which was a few days earlier. If you want them talking the way that they are, I suggest having them be three years old. Their speech isn't believeable for two year olds.
6/10/2007 c7 22quaint-little-categories
o, please write a fourth one!
that would be so awesome!
come on! you know you want to!
:) Kazza.
read my stories:
Falling For A Prank
and
Worth Falling For
22quaint-little-categorieso, please write a fourth one!
that would be so awesome!
come on! you know you want to!
:) Kazza.
read my stories:
Falling For A Prank
and
Worth Falling For
6/5/2007 c1 6chelash
My friend's last name is Nesbitt so she'll be pleased that her name is featured in a story!
As per usual, I love your stories.
Keep it up Sarah!
~*Chloe*~
6chelashMy friend's last name is Nesbitt so she'll be pleased that her name is featured in a story!
As per usual, I love your stories.
Keep it up Sarah!
~*Chloe*~
4/3/2007 c7 1SilvaK
I read your trilogy...You wrote three beautiful stories, very sweet...I thought they were a bit unrealistic,yet I enjoyed them as a whole...Nice job...
1SilvaKI read your trilogy...You wrote three beautiful stories, very sweet...I thought they were a bit unrealistic,yet I enjoyed them as a whole...Nice job...
2/23/2007 c7 20freshjazz42
Hey... I've added you to both my author alert and author favorites. You are fantastic and I can't wait to see what you will come up with next.
The ending was rather... "What comes next?"
However, I can see how it makes a good ending... fantastic!
20freshjazz42Hey... I've added you to both my author alert and author favorites. You are fantastic and I can't wait to see what you will come up with next.
The ending was rather... "What comes next?"
However, I can see how it makes a good ending... fantastic!
2/19/2007 c7 2Bglswrth454
A fitting ending to your trilogy about Amy House wunderkind. Looking forward to more. Give us more chapters of Mommy issues. Only critique is some slight typos but that seems to affect every writer on the site. Keep it up
2Bglswrth454A fitting ending to your trilogy about Amy House wunderkind. Looking forward to more. Give us more chapters of Mommy issues. Only critique is some slight typos but that seems to affect every writer on the site. Keep it up