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4/2/2009 c3 Random Veiwer of Naruto Stuff
4/30/2008 c1 Dhevix
Mhm... Yes, yes, I like it so far :) The writing style is above average, too, which is always nice, hm?
9/27/2007 c3 24DLHKM
This story is brilliant! Please continue
3/19/2007 c3 i like cheese fries
You have a nice writing style. Its easy to read, and I didn't see many errors. I hope you keep writing because I'd like to read more of this. Ignore the mary sue comment, the story just started! Shes not a mary sue at the moment. Be careful what you do with her from here on though because you just put her in akatsuki. Thats already a big risk of making her a mary sue.

Now im gonna sit back and watch things happen, I mean if you ever get around to updating it lol.
3/16/2007 c3 Scorpion Hime
Woah...you know, that was great!
3/15/2007 c1 Rambie
This set off my mary-sue radar. Am I really the only ne who thinks this?
3/10/2007 c2 Scorpion Hime
HALFWAY DECENT? That was wonderful!
1/28/2007 c1 16Naoko-Miharu
Wow, I really liked it so far, but that cliffhanger...

That just makes me really want to read more~!

Haha, great job!

1/28/2007 c1 RaverMutt
I think this is a pretty good beginning, though I would change the summary for it. I almost just skipped right by this story b/c it lacked description. Anyway keep going hun!

-Eyes Of Lunacy

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