for Miley and Jake2/28/2007 c8 
3He Breaks My Heart3 Everytime
Hey, great story so far! I think you should have Jake like kiddnap Miley into a closet and make her listen to why he was kissing Ashley or is it Amber... anyway... great story, update REALLY soon! :)
3He Breaks My Heart3 EverytimeHey, great story so far! I think you should have Jake like kiddnap Miley into a closet and make her listen to why he was kissing Ashley or is it Amber... anyway... great story, update REALLY soon! :)
2/27/2007 c2 Fanfiction-Lover
It's really good! You have great ideas. It may be a little rushed, but you'll get better! Great job :)
It's really good! You have great ideas. It may be a little rushed, but you'll get better! Great job :)
2/27/2007 c8 WOAH iits izzy
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO GOOD!
WRITE AONTHER ONE SOON!
I'LL TELL MILEY:)
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO GOOD!
WRITE AONTHER ONE SOON!
I'LL TELL MILEY:)
2/27/2007 c8 20loveandallthat
ur story needs first, to slow down, and second, one thing that keeps showing up throughout so it seems less random. but mostly the slow down part, because its kind of like . just relax, and put details for everything
20loveandallthatur story needs first, to slow down, and second, one thing that keeps showing up throughout so it seems less random. but mostly the slow down part, because its kind of like . just relax, and put details for everything
2/16/2007 c6 WOAH iits izzy
ok i have some ideas for you,
well miley goes home after having
a great time at Jake's
when she is sleeping she hears
a noise
suddenly the person revels themslef
IT'S HOLLY!
holly starts to attack miley
miley lies uncostion on the floor
the next day miley is at the hospital...
thx for ur time :)
I LUV UR STORIES!
from,
WOAH iits izzy
ok i have some ideas for you,
well miley goes home after having
a great time at Jake's
when she is sleeping she hears
a noise
suddenly the person revels themslef
IT'S HOLLY!
holly starts to attack miley
miley lies uncostion on the floor
the next day miley is at the hospital...
thx for ur time :)
I LUV UR STORIES!
from,
WOAH iits izzy
2/13/2007 c5 WOAH iits izzy
i have a great idea for you!
just as miley was about to kiss jake holly comes in!
then holly starts fighting miley!
that's all i got so far
i'll get back with more ideas!
thx,
WOAH iits izzy :)
i have a great idea for you!
just as miley was about to kiss jake holly comes in!
then holly starts fighting miley!
that's all i got so far
i'll get back with more ideas!
thx,
WOAH iits izzy :)
2/12/2007 c5 Joe Jonas Roxs My Bod
i think that you should have rachel walk in a start trying to kill miley because rachel wants Jake than you should have lily tell milley how much she like Oliver than have oliver behind lily when she says all this than oliver say that he likes miley than lily gets all mad and she goes out with jackson. But you don't have to it your story
i think that you should have rachel walk in a start trying to kill miley because rachel wants Jake than you should have lily tell milley how much she like Oliver than have oliver behind lily when she says all this than oliver say that he likes miley than lily gets all mad and she goes out with jackson. But you don't have to it your story
2/3/2007 c4 newjileyfan
i love this chapter. update soon.
i love this chapter. update soon.