for It's the Little Things7/19/2011 c6 
26Fastern
Normally I'm not a Harry Potter fan (after all the hype about it, it got a little bit tiring), but when I saw the summary for this I had to take a quick peak, and I am RELIEVED that I finally found a story on this site that is a decent read.
I really, really like how you approached the characters and explored their relationships with each other and how they responded to distinctive events in their lives. It`s refreshing to see a light-hearted, easy-to-read fic lacking in all the heavy angst that is so very popular.
One thing I especially admired about your story is that you were able to include George, post-Battle of Hogwarts, not angsting or even mentioning the death of his twin. To see him joking post-series in a fanfiction is...well, I can`t describe how refreshing that is. To be honest I`m getting tired of this `suicidal-angsty-George-who-never-got-over-his-twin`s-death` fanfiction. (I hope I`m conveying my feelings on this correctly.) BUT I DIGRESS -
My only crits revolve around the arrangement of some of the dialogue. I notice that you often describe the character`s actions first, and then put in the dialogue after. (e.g. Hermione spoke up. "But it doesn't have to be like this. There are other things they can try.")
Personally I`ve always found this extremely annoying. I`d prefer something that sounds more like: "But it doesn't have to be like this`,`said Hermoione, `` There are other things they can try."
f cbhjmnknjkmjnkb bf cx STUPUD KEYVBARD - sorry, my keys got stuck there for a minute. I bet if I was a wizard I could magic the keyboard into working. But I digress -
I also see that yoù`re fond of describing the characters` each and every movement, which you don`t always have to do.
That`s all I have to say right now, but all in all, this was a good read and it`s certainly going straight into my favourites.
Peace - Ms. Brown
26FasternNormally I'm not a Harry Potter fan (after all the hype about it, it got a little bit tiring), but when I saw the summary for this I had to take a quick peak, and I am RELIEVED that I finally found a story on this site that is a decent read.
I really, really like how you approached the characters and explored their relationships with each other and how they responded to distinctive events in their lives. It`s refreshing to see a light-hearted, easy-to-read fic lacking in all the heavy angst that is so very popular.
One thing I especially admired about your story is that you were able to include George, post-Battle of Hogwarts, not angsting or even mentioning the death of his twin. To see him joking post-series in a fanfiction is...well, I can`t describe how refreshing that is. To be honest I`m getting tired of this `suicidal-angsty-George-who-never-got-over-his-twin`s-death` fanfiction. (I hope I`m conveying my feelings on this correctly.) BUT I DIGRESS -
My only crits revolve around the arrangement of some of the dialogue. I notice that you often describe the character`s actions first, and then put in the dialogue after. (e.g. Hermione spoke up. "But it doesn't have to be like this. There are other things they can try.")
Personally I`ve always found this extremely annoying. I`d prefer something that sounds more like: "But it doesn't have to be like this`,`said Hermoione, `` There are other things they can try."
f cbhjmnknjkmjnkb bf cx STUPUD KEYVBARD - sorry, my keys got stuck there for a minute. I bet if I was a wizard I could magic the keyboard into working. But I digress -
I also see that yoù`re fond of describing the characters` each and every movement, which you don`t always have to do.
That`s all I have to say right now, but all in all, this was a good read and it`s certainly going straight into my favourites.
Peace - Ms. Brown
7/19/2011 c13 1TeddyandVictorie
Great chapter! I can honestly say I have never read anything like it before! And thats a good thing lol
1TeddyandVictorieGreat chapter! I can honestly say I have never read anything like it before! And thats a good thing lol
7/18/2011 c12 14Cookie05
Awww sweet
well most of them are sweet
but I cried when I read the ones where Arthur dies
and Percy leaves
so discriptive
In my favs
14Cookie05Awww sweet
well most of them are sweet
but I cried when I read the ones where Arthur dies
and Percy leaves
so discriptive
In my favs
6/22/2011 c10 59Alcoholic Semen Thrower
beautifully written! i absolutely loved it! you showed the emotion beautifully! you also have the characters perfectly charactered! favorite chapter so far!
59Alcoholic Semen Throwerbeautifully written! i absolutely loved it! you showed the emotion beautifully! you also have the characters perfectly charactered! favorite chapter so far!
6/8/2011 c8 8jennimiley
AWWWWWW! I love the Weasleys! Great job portraying how proud Arthur and Molly are of their kids!
8jennimileyAWWWWWW! I love the Weasleys! Great job portraying how proud Arthur and Molly are of their kids!
6/8/2011 c8 16ermireallydontcare
Lovely collection of one-shots!
I loved the last one, but didn't Ginny play Chaser? I know she plays seeker in Ootp but in H BP she says she prefers Chaser and I'm certain JKR said she played Chaser for the Holyhead Harpies! (I feel like such a nerd for knowing that!)
16ermireallydontcareLovely collection of one-shots!
I loved the last one, but didn't Ginny play Chaser? I know she plays seeker in Ootp but in H BP she says she prefers Chaser and I'm certain JKR said she played Chaser for the Holyhead Harpies! (I feel like such a nerd for knowing that!)