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1/31/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
You switch tenses a lot. Maybe reading your work again will help you see the typos and edit them?
5/26/2014 c23 4andyg2525
this was awesome
5/26/2014 c23 76Kenn.Faith.Dawn
fantastic story
5/18/2014 c14 4andyg2525
this is great keep it coming
5/15/2014 c13 76Kenn.Faith.Dawn
awesome chapter
7/27/2013 c11 4andyg2525
sorry to hear about what happened take your time and keep me posted till next time
2/12/2008 c6 611Ghostwriter
Good two chaps. Catch ya on the flip side.
1/30/2008 c6 16xxunowhoxx
that was gr8, keep at it
8/24/2007 c6 4peaches849
aww! kyle is so sweet! keep writing!
7/19/2007 c4 611Ghostwriter
This is an interesting read. However, even though it's alternate universe, I feel Trent is WAY out of character. Like another reviewer said, he'd NEVER hit a girl when he's himself. When he's evil, maybe...but, however, that's just my opinion. Other than that, great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
7/6/2007 c4 4peaches849
i really hope trent doesn't go after Kira! at least if he tries, have Kira beat his ass and have him put in jail or something. men like trent should be stopped. so far, i like your story. keep connor and kira together. they're a great couple and one of my favs.
3/14/2007 c4 14FireMoonLight
your story is rated M not Pg-13
2/20/2007 c4 69The Sushi Monster
ok...

No way. You have just gone too far. I HATE bashing, but I'll let you do what you wish. Its just that the characters are WAY too OOC.

Trent hitting a girl? Never. When he was evil, maybe, but after that? And unmorphed? No way.

Ugh. Thats just my opinion. Feel free to take it as a flame, but that wasnt my intention.
2/12/2007 c3 PeterBladley19
omg omg omg omg that was great please write more.

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