
1/31/2015 c1
19Smiling Seshat
You switch tenses a lot. Maybe reading your work again will help you see the typos and edit them?

You switch tenses a lot. Maybe reading your work again will help you see the typos and edit them?
7/27/2013 c11
4andyg2525
sorry to hear about what happened take your time and keep me posted till next time

sorry to hear about what happened take your time and keep me posted till next time
7/19/2007 c4
611Ghostwriter
This is an interesting read. However, even though it's alternate universe, I feel Trent is WAY out of character. Like another reviewer said, he'd NEVER hit a girl when he's himself. When he's evil, maybe...but, however, that's just my opinion. Other than that, great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

This is an interesting read. However, even though it's alternate universe, I feel Trent is WAY out of character. Like another reviewer said, he'd NEVER hit a girl when he's himself. When he's evil, maybe...but, however, that's just my opinion. Other than that, great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
7/6/2007 c4
4peaches849
i really hope trent doesn't go after Kira! at least if he tries, have Kira beat his ass and have him put in jail or something. men like trent should be stopped. so far, i like your story. keep connor and kira together. they're a great couple and one of my favs.

i really hope trent doesn't go after Kira! at least if he tries, have Kira beat his ass and have him put in jail or something. men like trent should be stopped. so far, i like your story. keep connor and kira together. they're a great couple and one of my favs.
2/20/2007 c4
69The Sushi Monster
ok...
No way. You have just gone too far. I HATE bashing, but I'll let you do what you wish. Its just that the characters are WAY too OOC.
Trent hitting a girl? Never. When he was evil, maybe, but after that? And unmorphed? No way.
Ugh. Thats just my opinion. Feel free to take it as a flame, but that wasnt my intention.

ok...
No way. You have just gone too far. I HATE bashing, but I'll let you do what you wish. Its just that the characters are WAY too OOC.
Trent hitting a girl? Never. When he was evil, maybe, but after that? And unmorphed? No way.
Ugh. Thats just my opinion. Feel free to take it as a flame, but that wasnt my intention.