for Circumstantial Consequence7/8/2013 c29 Swtor Chef
This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you
This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you
9/11/2012 c30 
2beachchick3
WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW i just finished reading Book 1 and 2 for this serious and can i just say stupendous cannot wait, till the end until you update i don't care this is an amazing story, and can't wait till you get your muse back for this story because to be quite frank this love triangle is going to test Murtagh X Alycie X Elian relationship and i cannot wait to see this turn out! don't give up on this story it is amazing!
2beachchick3WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW i just finished reading Book 1 and 2 for this serious and can i just say stupendous cannot wait, till the end until you update i don't care this is an amazing story, and can't wait till you get your muse back for this story because to be quite frank this love triangle is going to test Murtagh X Alycie X Elian relationship and i cannot wait to see this turn out! don't give up on this story it is amazing!
9/1/2011 c30 1CherryBlossomTrinity
I LOVE this story and the one before it. Please update soon, it's hard for me to find inheritance cycle fics that I like, and this ones amazing :)
1CherryBlossomTrinityI LOVE this story and the one before it. Please update soon, it's hard for me to find inheritance cycle fics that I like, and this ones amazing :)
12/3/2010 c30 Luvee
WHAT? WHERE did this pair pop up out of? I read this for MurtaghxOC goodness. Come on, please, where is it? It's like reading a book of the inheritance cycle and going 20 chapters without any Eragon. It just isn't right..
WHAT? WHERE did this pair pop up out of? I read this for MurtaghxOC goodness. Come on, please, where is it? It's like reading a book of the inheritance cycle and going 20 chapters without any Eragon. It just isn't right..
9/13/2010 c30 7Marauder no. Five
okay next chapter please. this has been an excellent story so far. you've actually inspired me to start writing again. i haven't for a few months now i rarely have the patience to sit and write my daydreams.
keep up the wonderful writing. i'm very glad i started reading this story, it was well worth it.
happy writing.
7Marauder no. Fiveokay next chapter please. this has been an excellent story so far. you've actually inspired me to start writing again. i haven't for a few months now i rarely have the patience to sit and write my daydreams.
keep up the wonderful writing. i'm very glad i started reading this story, it was well worth it.
happy writing.
6/9/2010 c1 Leonora Lachance
Please update! I usually only read completed fanfics so I read the first one and I didn't notice that the last update was LAST YEAR so I read this story... and now I'm sad... review!
Please update! I usually only read completed fanfics so I read the first one and I didn't notice that the last update was LAST YEAR so I read this story... and now I'm sad... review!
4/15/2010 c30 Dinolover
Okay, when i read your twilight fic and then saw that you hadn't updated for 2 years i told myself that i wouldn't read anymore of your work in case u never finish them. But i gave in and read this one because your writing is so fantastic. Now ive read this one and i regret it coz i love it so much. So im begging you to finish your stories. Please Please Please finish them, you have a real talent for writing and a fantastic imagination. Ur the second writer ive read that i acually really love and ive been on these fics sites for over a year now.
So please finsih them. and P.S. I really hope that she and Elian do not end up together lol.
Taz x
Okay, when i read your twilight fic and then saw that you hadn't updated for 2 years i told myself that i wouldn't read anymore of your work in case u never finish them. But i gave in and read this one because your writing is so fantastic. Now ive read this one and i regret it coz i love it so much. So im begging you to finish your stories. Please Please Please finish them, you have a real talent for writing and a fantastic imagination. Ur the second writer ive read that i acually really love and ive been on these fics sites for over a year now.
So please finsih them. and P.S. I really hope that she and Elian do not end up together lol.
Taz x
2/20/2010 c30 Sherrie H
I majorly enjoyed the prequel to this and I'm engrossed by this story! Keep up the great work!
I majorly enjoyed the prequel to this and I'm engrossed by this story! Keep up the great work!
2/8/2010 c30 adam
I agree with padfoot and stacey. It should be Alycie and Murtagh.
I also dont really like Elian...You should kill him violently perhaps with something involving a spear and his groin =). And then make Alycie get back with Murtagh
MURTAGHxALYCIE =)
I agree with padfoot and stacey. It should be Alycie and Murtagh.
I also dont really like Elian...You should kill him violently perhaps with something involving a spear and his groin =). And then make Alycie get back with Murtagh
MURTAGHxALYCIE =)
12/10/2009 c30 10Padfoot and Stacey
NO! They CAN'T be together! Bad. Bad. Bad. Wonderful chapter... but NO! :( I really dislike this pairing.. as you can tell. However, it's your story, do with it what you like.. it's just that Alycie makes a wonderful match in character for Murtagh, and I enjoy the way their relationship played out so far. I think that she couldn't possibly be over him! Soo.. I know it's just a story, and I shouldn't be this worked up over it, but I just MUST insist on keeping that original pairing!
10Padfoot and StaceyNO! They CAN'T be together! Bad. Bad. Bad. Wonderful chapter... but NO! :( I really dislike this pairing.. as you can tell. However, it's your story, do with it what you like.. it's just that Alycie makes a wonderful match in character for Murtagh, and I enjoy the way their relationship played out so far. I think that she couldn't possibly be over him! Soo.. I know it's just a story, and I shouldn't be this worked up over it, but I just MUST insist on keeping that original pairing!
12/3/2009 c30 5yumiXjaganshi
O.O
oh
my
goodness.
NO! DX WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END!
please please please update soon! i want to have more thorn! and alycie's visions!
still love this story! please update soon!
5yumiXjaganshiO.O
oh
my
goodness.
NO! DX WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END!
please please please update soon! i want to have more thorn! and alycie's visions!
still love this story! please update soon!
11/26/2009 c30 15Pinkster Lily
Oh, Eilian. I knew that was going to happen. And poor Alycie, nothing ever seems to go right for her.
Anyway, this was an amazing chapter, even if you think it didn't cover much ground. I think this chapter let us into a more in-depth view of Alycie's beliefs. Update soon!
Signed,
V.H.
15Pinkster LilyOh, Eilian. I knew that was going to happen. And poor Alycie, nothing ever seems to go right for her.
Anyway, this was an amazing chapter, even if you think it didn't cover much ground. I think this chapter let us into a more in-depth view of Alycie's beliefs. Update soon!
Signed,
V.H.
11/25/2009 c30 7Destiny's Daughter
Aww cute little filler scene :) nice job!
OMG MURTAUGH!
O.O
Cant wait for the rest!
Signed,
Destiny's Daughter.
7Destiny's DaughterAww cute little filler scene :) nice job!
OMG MURTAUGH!
O.O
Cant wait for the rest!
Signed,
Destiny's Daughter.