for Naruto: Trail Of Freedom2/10/2022 c15 Guest
This would really be so much better if I didn't know he would end up with Sakura. Ugh.
This would really be so much better if I didn't know he would end up with Sakura. Ugh.
9/28/2019 c20 Guest
Wow, Naruto is weak. Struggling against a few B-Rank Jounin at best? Get out of here. The fights are too long and Naruto’s abilities are inconsistent.
Wow, Naruto is weak. Struggling against a few B-Rank Jounin at best? Get out of here. The fights are too long and Naruto’s abilities are inconsistent.
5/4/2016 c37 Tarrasen
Woah, so I came upon this fanfic, and I was like, eh. Then I kept reading, then reading some more. Whoa... Is the ending ever going to be published? This has to be one of the most original and amazing fanfics I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
You're creativity is inspiring.
Just thank you!
Woah, so I came upon this fanfic, and I was like, eh. Then I kept reading, then reading some more. Whoa... Is the ending ever going to be published? This has to be one of the most original and amazing fanfics I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
You're creativity is inspiring.
Just thank you!
12/15/2015 c2 Soccer27
i am so excitied to read the rest of this story! best ine i have read in awhile
i am so excitied to read the rest of this story! best ine i have read in awhile
5/6/2015 c37 
25St3rfire- serafina
Good story . loved the way you explain. every detail as you read long the chapter. Please update soon. I want to know what happens next.
25St3rfire- serafinaGood story . loved the way you explain. every detail as you read long the chapter. Please update soon. I want to know what happens next.
2/14/2015 c37 3Refraction of Light
It really is too bad you are no longer active after so long. If you ever finish this me and probably a lot more fans would be eagerly waiting for it. I mean personally I would like to know how Sakura would deal with the huge wall to Naruto's heart named Yuka or will it just come naturally. Will that light kid (who I'm assuming is a personification of young Naruto's hope and will) fix the seal completely or will Naruto;s foreshadowing of him martyring himself come to pass. Well just had to add my voice on the off chance that you'll ever get back on this.
3Refraction of LightIt really is too bad you are no longer active after so long. If you ever finish this me and probably a lot more fans would be eagerly waiting for it. I mean personally I would like to know how Sakura would deal with the huge wall to Naruto's heart named Yuka or will it just come naturally. Will that light kid (who I'm assuming is a personification of young Naruto's hope and will) fix the seal completely or will Naruto;s foreshadowing of him martyring himself come to pass. Well just had to add my voice on the off chance that you'll ever get back on this.
1/19/2015 c25 scotty26
wow...i guess the white hair should have been a given *snorts* what a monkey wrench lol..dare i say this has been a thrilling ride reading this..wasn't entirely expected him to be alive but i guess he had his reason for doing what he did and i wonder if what Kakashi saw wasn't a illusion or something..i know you haven't updated this story since 2008 so i guess you had your reasons...i'm enjoying this a lot more than HoD but this also has some bumps and bruises but not as much as HoD but that's just me though
wow...i guess the white hair should have been a given *snorts* what a monkey wrench lol..dare i say this has been a thrilling ride reading this..wasn't entirely expected him to be alive but i guess he had his reason for doing what he did and i wonder if what Kakashi saw wasn't a illusion or something..i know you haven't updated this story since 2008 so i guess you had your reasons...i'm enjoying this a lot more than HoD but this also has some bumps and bruises but not as much as HoD but that's just me though
5/3/2013 c37 6toofine89
I like the story a lot, especially the "void" and the confederation, both of which strike me as unique though the void reminds me of a Wrinkle in Time. Anyway, continuing the story would be beautiful and I really like where it's going, but I do wonder what "power up" he'll have to go through in three weeks to win.
6toofine89I like the story a lot, especially the "void" and the confederation, both of which strike me as unique though the void reminds me of a Wrinkle in Time. Anyway, continuing the story would be beautiful and I really like where it's going, but I do wonder what "power up" he'll have to go through in three weeks to win.
8/7/2012 c37 Andrew
Please continue the story I'd like to see how it turns out because it has been really good And you a great writer
Please continue the story I'd like to see how it turns out because it has been really good And you a great writer
6/27/2012 c37 Jis
Its been four years, where the hell r u ?
Its been four years, where the hell r u ?
2/17/2011 c37 yenete
although incomplete this story is awesome, if you tweaked the names of the caraters and the names of the locations and jutsu then this story could probably be a stand alone novel. great work
although incomplete this story is awesome, if you tweaked the names of the caraters and the names of the locations and jutsu then this story could probably be a stand alone novel. great work
2/7/2011 c37 guitar guy
Ok this may be a bit rude but ... did you die or something? you have this amazingly epic story going strong and you just stoped :( i see its been over two years since you updated it... heck for all i know you dont even check this thing anymore... but just incase you do i hope you do come back and finish the fic because it is epic and you basically stoped right before the climaxe i feel like i was just watch the greatest movie of all time that would only come on once cause its just that fucking amazing and got all the way to the last 20 minutes and my power cut or some other really fuck up senerios that fit that situation...I just want to say plz come back and finish this story... seriously if you want to stop writing after that be my guest although you are rather talented but still finish this plz!
Ok this may be a bit rude but ... did you die or something? you have this amazingly epic story going strong and you just stoped :( i see its been over two years since you updated it... heck for all i know you dont even check this thing anymore... but just incase you do i hope you do come back and finish the fic because it is epic and you basically stoped right before the climaxe i feel like i was just watch the greatest movie of all time that would only come on once cause its just that fucking amazing and got all the way to the last 20 minutes and my power cut or some other really fuck up senerios that fit that situation...I just want to say plz come back and finish this story... seriously if you want to stop writing after that be my guest although you are rather talented but still finish this plz!