11/10/2013 c5 Elise
Very intriguing, interesting, fascinating, thrilling and captivating. I'd love to read more. :)
Very intriguing, interesting, fascinating, thrilling and captivating. I'd love to read more. :)
4/20/2011 c5 8Swetlana
Wow, your story is original, exciting and well... just great! :D
Please write more!
- Swetlana
P.S. Yes, I do realise that this is an abandoned story, since the last update was in 2007 but I wanted to give it a try anyway and just to let you know people (or maybe it's just me) still read it ;)
Wow, your story is original, exciting and well... just great! :D
Please write more!
- Swetlana
P.S. Yes, I do realise that this is an abandoned story, since the last update was in 2007 but I wanted to give it a try anyway and just to let you know people (or maybe it's just me) still read it ;)
11/16/2007 c5 4adventurous
Have you ever read Guardians of Time? It's just in that series the evil people were called the order and some had powers and they had to protect the past - it's one of my fave series. Anyway, this is good, please update soon, why does Reggin need so much power?
Have you ever read Guardians of Time? It's just in that series the evil people were called the order and some had powers and they had to protect the past - it's one of my fave series. Anyway, this is good, please update soon, why does Reggin need so much power?
6/7/2007 c1 00Marylin00
Hey, ya really should work on this further! It's really stretching and it's making me curious like what's really going on with luciano? please write more i really like it!
Kisses with love, Marylin
Hey, ya really should work on this further! It's really stretching and it's making me curious like what's really going on with luciano? please write more i really like it!
Kisses with love, Marylin
2/18/2007 c3 560oxymoronic0
dun dun dun!
how can u do such a mean cliffie? wa
poor luciano *sniffle* i love your idea of old talk just at ye to the ende of everything ;)
dun dun dun!
how can u do such a mean cliffie? wa
poor luciano *sniffle* i love your idea of old talk just at ye to the ende of everything ;)
2/13/2007 c2 0oxymoronic0
i certainly will. i feel mean, i'm you're only reviewer. *sniff*
am kind of confused but then again im weird so yeah.
i certainly will. i feel mean, i'm you're only reviewer. *sniff*
am kind of confused but then again im weird so yeah.
2/13/2007 c1 0oxymoronic0
barley is spelt barely. otherwise youre talking about a cereal.
but yeah otherwise good :D didnt know u wer workin on one of these look 4wad 2 more asap
barley is spelt barely. otherwise youre talking about a cereal.
but yeah otherwise good :D didnt know u wer workin on one of these look 4wad 2 more asap