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6/27/2010 c1 6QuietShadowz
haha i like tentens point of view of this whole thing . And you would think neji would know tenten good enough to know that she was fake laughing and wasent even paying attention and stuff he musta been pretty jelouse and stuff to not notice
5/5/2009 c1 crystalwolfberri
XD Tenten's gonna attack him once he comes back! simply because he was trying to help her, lmbo!

haha, nice one. ;)
5/23/2008 c1 inara963
hey there, this was really good using tenten's pov, its unique actually, and i thought that u planned the story well. Reading both the pov's was fun because you could see how the situation was perceived and what the reality was...i just noticed that u have done one on inuyasha, i love that anime so im gonna have a read of those too...ill let u know soon what i thought of those...thx for the uploads
2/16/2007 c1 BlankityBlankBlank
Yay! Another one. Thank you so so much!
2/16/2007 c1 2dragonkyuubi101
YAY FOR PLOT BUNNIES! COOLIO!
2/15/2007 c1 Cheese Maiden
Great start. I see it's not only guys that can be cluelees. Plesae update soon.
2/15/2007 c1 13naash
lol...tenten he's just jealous. geez she can be really dense. lol. great job

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