for Fan Fiction Gave Me False Perceptions About Love7/2/2007 c1 
8JaneLovesDrama
It's a good idea, but I think you can do better in the way it's set up. Check the grammar and try adding quotation marks in stead of
{Hermione- (said this)}
Also, check the spelling. It could be so good! Please try to improve it, I really like the idea and the base. It's cute.
8JaneLovesDramaIt's a good idea, but I think you can do better in the way it's set up. Check the grammar and try adding quotation marks in stead of
{Hermione- (said this)}
Also, check the spelling. It could be so good! Please try to improve it, I really like the idea and the base. It's cute.
4/6/2007 c5 7GreenCat3
Hehe, funny story, you guys. :D And you know I'm always ready to be your unpaid, overworked editor for any stories in future.
P.S.: *whip noises*
~Alex
7GreenCat3Hehe, funny story, you guys. :D And you know I'm always ready to be your unpaid, overworked editor for any stories in future.
P.S.: *whip noises*
~Alex
2/20/2007 c4 147Kailey Hamilton
Well, it's definitely better when you quote the fic they're reading.
I love it.
Also, I'm having trouble getting over the World Wide Wand thing xD its really funny.
Update soon!
Un beso gigante,
Kayi.
147Kailey HamiltonWell, it's definitely better when you quote the fic they're reading.
I love it.
Also, I'm having trouble getting over the World Wide Wand thing xD its really funny.
Update soon!
Un beso gigante,
Kayi.
2/19/2007 c3 2E B Darcy
This has a really great plot, I love the idea, I wish this would happen to me! Your grammer does need a bit of work, though, and it would be a lot better if you had normal sentences, not just their name with a dash and then the quote.
2E B DarcyThis has a really great plot, I love the idea, I wish this would happen to me! Your grammer does need a bit of work, though, and it would be a lot better if you had normal sentences, not just their name with a dash and then the quote.
2/18/2007 c1 Fnicks-Gurlz
You should put "..." around what the people are saying, I helps keep track of what they are saying.
You should put "..." around what the people are saying, I helps keep track of what they are saying.
2/18/2007 c1 147Kailey Hamilton
Love the idea... World Wide Wand xD
Just one thing... It would have been great if you showed the conversation in the James Conner fic that resembled the one that the 'real four' had...
I'm looking forward to an update!
Un beso gigante,
Kayi.
PS: As you might have noticed, I'm Venezuelan. That means, Spanish is my mother language... So I'm really sorry if this is an offense to the English language, if you know what I mean.
147Kailey HamiltonLove the idea... World Wide Wand xD
Just one thing... It would have been great if you showed the conversation in the James Conner fic that resembled the one that the 'real four' had...
I'm looking forward to an update!
Un beso gigante,
Kayi.
PS: As you might have noticed, I'm Venezuelan. That means, Spanish is my mother language... So I'm really sorry if this is an offense to the English language, if you know what I mean.
2/18/2007 c1 1December's girl
Good story idea, creative. But, kinda hard to read without the quotes, but good so far
1December's girlGood story idea, creative. But, kinda hard to read without the quotes, but good so far