for Ninja Rider8/30/2017 c5 
10Wolfone10
Well one source of inspiration, stop spending so much time with OCs, that usually either makes fans look elsewhere or kills the will to keep writing. Also the emo naruto gets VERY tiresome quickly. Remember when johnny says "if I am stuck with this then I will make it my power"?.. You'd think naruto would come to that realization a LOT, LOT quicker, since he's ALREADY been under a curse since the day he was born, (and he's kinda a MAGNET for trouble and basically CATASTROPHES). Seriously, even BEFORE selling his soul, he couldn't so much as deliver a carton of eggs outside the village without being attacked by a giant chicken monster, the evil spirits of all dead chickens AND somehow be holding a long lost gem of an ancient civilization, which is sought after by a group of missing nins in one of those said eggs! (his luck is JUST THAT BAD...Or good, depending on how you look at it).
So really, he should just run with it, being "cursed by the devil" with "an unknown and possibly very bad outcome that might threaten him and all he holds dear"?.. Should be more along the lines of "Oh look, it must be Wednesday"! Ok, maybe not that blase' but you get the idea.
10Wolfone10Well one source of inspiration, stop spending so much time with OCs, that usually either makes fans look elsewhere or kills the will to keep writing. Also the emo naruto gets VERY tiresome quickly. Remember when johnny says "if I am stuck with this then I will make it my power"?.. You'd think naruto would come to that realization a LOT, LOT quicker, since he's ALREADY been under a curse since the day he was born, (and he's kinda a MAGNET for trouble and basically CATASTROPHES). Seriously, even BEFORE selling his soul, he couldn't so much as deliver a carton of eggs outside the village without being attacked by a giant chicken monster, the evil spirits of all dead chickens AND somehow be holding a long lost gem of an ancient civilization, which is sought after by a group of missing nins in one of those said eggs! (his luck is JUST THAT BAD...Or good, depending on how you look at it).
So really, he should just run with it, being "cursed by the devil" with "an unknown and possibly very bad outcome that might threaten him and all he holds dear"?.. Should be more along the lines of "Oh look, it must be Wednesday"! Ok, maybe not that blase' but you get the idea.
8/30/2017 c4 Wolfone10
It kinda cracks me up that Johnny has to be in this to what teach naruto? Notice how NONE of the riders (except the woman one) had ANY training AT ALL, just burst into flame and INSTANTLY started kicking tail and taking names? Why does he NEED training? This isn't "the FORCE" this is a VERY old demon that's been around longer then DIRT and been slaughtering entire CIVILIZATIONS for generations, now how much experience with it's powers it decides to share is kinda up for debate. But at least all of "the Rider"s seem to know one thing off the bat, whatever they can imagine? They can pretty much DO!
It kinda cracks me up that Johnny has to be in this to what teach naruto? Notice how NONE of the riders (except the woman one) had ANY training AT ALL, just burst into flame and INSTANTLY started kicking tail and taking names? Why does he NEED training? This isn't "the FORCE" this is a VERY old demon that's been around longer then DIRT and been slaughtering entire CIVILIZATIONS for generations, now how much experience with it's powers it decides to share is kinda up for debate. But at least all of "the Rider"s seem to know one thing off the bat, whatever they can imagine? They can pretty much DO!
8/30/2017 c2 Wolfone10
How far Orochimaru is willing to go to get what he wants? How is that a BIG reveal? Everybody knows that is "as far as it takes", I mean the man has NO SOUL (that's already been shown), he cares for NOTHING (except himself), and he is completely TERRIFIED of dying (like to the point of WAAAAAAY gone madness and not even RISKING IT POSSIBLY happening *main reason he ALWAYS runs*) (maybe because he KNOWS what's waiting for him?)
How far Orochimaru is willing to go to get what he wants? How is that a BIG reveal? Everybody knows that is "as far as it takes", I mean the man has NO SOUL (that's already been shown), he cares for NOTHING (except himself), and he is completely TERRIFIED of dying (like to the point of WAAAAAAY gone madness and not even RISKING IT POSSIBLY happening *main reason he ALWAYS runs*) (maybe because he KNOWS what's waiting for him?)
8/30/2017 c1 Wolfone10
Well, while I think selling your soul for sasUKE out of EVERYBODY is a very STUPID and worthless sacrifice, it IS interesting to have "the Rider" back. One of THE MOST powerful characters ever to grace the pages of comics and the screens. It's also a good fit with Naruto (he's about the only one in the ENTIRE story, that has the WILL to fight zarathos from within and use the rider for good on the outside) since the entire two series seem quite OBSESSED with revenge (and how it differs from vengeance) and the past. This outta be very interesting.
Well, while I think selling your soul for sasUKE out of EVERYBODY is a very STUPID and worthless sacrifice, it IS interesting to have "the Rider" back. One of THE MOST powerful characters ever to grace the pages of comics and the screens. It's also a good fit with Naruto (he's about the only one in the ENTIRE story, that has the WILL to fight zarathos from within and use the rider for good on the outside) since the entire two series seem quite OBSESSED with revenge (and how it differs from vengeance) and the past. This outta be very interesting.
1/2/2016 c5 Lucy
Maybe in the next chapter Naurto N Sauske should talk about what Naurto done.
Maybe in the next chapter Naurto N Sauske should talk about what Naurto done.
1/25/2015 c5 kayla
Ohhhhhh, conflict!
Ohhhhhh, conflict!
5/3/2014 c5 11socialgirl378
I love your story so far! It's so cool that Naruto's the Ghost Rider! I actually thought of a possibility that Sasuke knew the Devil because he encountered him the day of the Uchiha clan massacre; the Devil tempted him to sign the deal in exchange for the resurrection of his parents, but Sasuke declined.
11socialgirl378I love your story so far! It's so cool that Naruto's the Ghost Rider! I actually thought of a possibility that Sasuke knew the Devil because he encountered him the day of the Uchiha clan massacre; the Devil tempted him to sign the deal in exchange for the resurrection of his parents, but Sasuke declined.
11/25/2013 c5 Guest
Horry crap! U play dead space and bioshock?! (Mah favorite games eva) good job with this!
Horry crap! U play dead space and bioshock?! (Mah favorite games eva) good job with this!
4/19/2013 c5 Spartan 140
Lol, I loved the Dead rising, Halo, and Bioshock cameo/easter egg appearances thing at the A/N in the beggining, and that "asta la vista" thing too. HA! Terminator 2, good times...GOOOOD times!
Lol, I loved the Dead rising, Halo, and Bioshock cameo/easter egg appearances thing at the A/N in the beggining, and that "asta la vista" thing too. HA! Terminator 2, good times...GOOOOD times!