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5/18/2007 c1 u
in ghost rider there were romance all who i kidding i havint even seen the movie hehehe yet
5/18/2007 c4 3Gforce member45
awesome chapter! And the lines are from Red vs blue, am i right? blarg is from the alien, knock knock is from gary, and you foolish fools is from omal'y. I can never spell his name right.
5/18/2007 c4 Tsukiko The LIbrarian
ok dude, this is a cool story. i like how u added the life draining bit. funny, i was picturing The Mummy when i read that!i have some suggestions. i see Naruto transforming into a guy witha skull on fire and the bony hands, bottom line, he turns skeletal. that's a cool word, skeletal...oh yeah. anyway, i see him in a black kimono or yukata, better yet, something that inuyasha wears, only black. his hair is fire, and he has 9 tails, an effect from the kyuubi. although, maybe the fire should be a different color. blue? purple? or PINK? ignore the pink, i was thinking blue for his chakra or purple for the combination of his chakra and the kyuubi's chakra. is the story a Naruto x Hinata? i hope so. instead of Naruto in a kimono, he can wear black ANBU pants, like what Kakashi wears, only everything is black. he can have a vest like kakashi's, same color as the pants. also, add spikes to the vest. he should have thick army boots, need i say the color? on the back should be the kanji for ninja and rider. oh, and i think the name is Mestopheles. well, that's all i can say except i love the story! it's so good! please update soon! as soon as i can get an account, this story is going under favorites!

-Tsukiko Kyoujin the Librarian

(The Librarian thing is from the two movies The Librarian: Quest For the Spear and The Librarian: Return to King Solomon's Mines. My name Tsukiko means 'moon child' and Kyoujin means 'lunatic.' i thought it was fitting. XD
3/26/2007 c3 1MadHatter427
Kinda cree[y but great thanks for finally updateing don't ttake os long next time!
3/16/2007 c1 Kumoatsu
3/13/2007 c3 narutobleach fan 101
i was actually looking for a storie in which naruto is the rider and not sauske this is a coinsedence (did i spell that right) awsome storie pls update soon!
3/12/2007 c3 14Gawdzilla
this is pretty sick! i loved the ghost raider movie, and i'm expecting this to turn out awesome. update soon.
2/20/2007 c2 1MadHatter427
THis sounds SO COOL! please update (Naruto wont be evil will he?)
2/19/2007 c2 3Gforce member45
Yikes, man that would suck if it happened to anyone.
2/19/2007 c2 Turok1
i agree with the Naruto/Hinata pairing it never gets old..and its always a slight challenge to put out a new way of them getting this story seems very good
2/19/2007 c1 95Mr. Chaos
Looks like a good story, will be interesting to see how you balance everything out, and how much like the movie/comics you ok (aka others Ninja Riders)
2/18/2007 c1 Turok1
interesting idea and intro will read further chapters
2/18/2007 c1 3Gforce member45
This is going to be quite interesting by the looks of it.
2/18/2007 c1 2Jak4
This looks very intresting,I wanna see were you go with this.UPDATE SOON
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