for Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto10/16/2024 c4 MrTurnt
You picked the least interesting genin team possible for him. I genuinly dont care at all for any member should of just kept him on anbu
You picked the least interesting genin team possible for him. I genuinly dont care at all for any member should of just kept him on anbu
4/25/2024 c2 Cthul
Yeah no, grammar is still atrocious and I think this story is going to be a pain to read through since I’d need to shut off 99% of my brain just to understand what I’m reading. Sucks that the plot had promise but the execution is awful.
Yeah no, grammar is still atrocious and I think this story is going to be a pain to read through since I’d need to shut off 99% of my brain just to understand what I’m reading. Sucks that the plot had promise but the execution is awful.
4/25/2024 c1 Cthul
A lot of typos already, and that’s just in the first chapter. Plot has some promise though so I’ll give it two more chapters.
A lot of typos already, and that’s just in the first chapter. Plot has some promise though so I’ll give it two more chapters.
7/20/2023 c9 yahska
70 feet in 2 second is kind of slow for a ninja. That is about the same speed as an Olympic sprinter.
70 feet in 2 second is kind of slow for a ninja. That is about the same speed as an Olympic sprinter.
7/3/2023 c2 narutouzumaki9718
Would be nice for there to be a nursery in the house and him to find it and it affect him emotionally.
Would be nice for there to be a nursery in the house and him to find it and it affect him emotionally.
5/31/2023 c2 Brian West
This certainly is a wonderful story and different too. It’s rare to see a Naruto story where he is happy most his life. As the pairing goes I am disappointed. Gender swapping screams cheaply made characters. I strongly recommend Anko as the girl. Both have similar personality quirks and fit well together. Not to mention she is sexy as hell. I love big breasted girls.
This certainly is a wonderful story and different too. It’s rare to see a Naruto story where he is happy most his life. As the pairing goes I am disappointed. Gender swapping screams cheaply made characters. I strongly recommend Anko as the girl. Both have similar personality quirks and fit well together. Not to mention she is sexy as hell. I love big breasted girls.
12/25/2022 c19 Zeke Hooper
good story.
good story.
12/22/2022 c1 Zeke Hooper
why would his mother go into battle after giving birth?
why would his mother go into battle after giving birth?
10/1/2022 c1 Aedwards179
how did they lose civilians? they had at least5 days the evacuate the village of all civilians they should've been able to leave easily and only have a bikini casualties
how did they lose civilians? they had at least5 days the evacuate the village of all civilians they should've been able to leave easily and only have a bikini casualties
2/27/2022 c1 
7Olivier Antoine
Poor grammar, poor pacing, overall just a drag to read. There seems to have been a decent amount of thought put into the concept, but very little
7Olivier AntoinePoor grammar, poor pacing, overall just a drag to read. There seems to have been a decent amount of thought put into the concept, but very little