
8/1/2013 c1 Someone
Such a sad story. Well written.
Such a sad story. Well written.
12/9/2009 c1
23Star of Airdrie
wow, this is fantastic. Very sad, very different. Very well written.
Great job!
LJ

wow, this is fantastic. Very sad, very different. Very well written.
Great job!
LJ
8/13/2007 c1
4lemony anemone
I finally decided to read this, and I'm so glad I did. I usually don't read angst, but this was good, very VERY good. At first I didn't know who was narrating, but eventually I figured out it was Argent. I haven't thought about Argent and RedX as a couple but they would look cute together - I mean same color scheme, red and black, but so SAD. Well done.

I finally decided to read this, and I'm so glad I did. I usually don't read angst, but this was good, very VERY good. At first I didn't know who was narrating, but eventually I figured out it was Argent. I haven't thought about Argent and RedX as a couple but they would look cute together - I mean same color scheme, red and black, but so SAD. Well done.
8/10/2007 c1
5AnimalGurl55
This was sad, but it was one of those sad stories that are so unbelievably good and moving. This was really good (onto the favorties it shall go) and I would love to see what happened to Robin, Bumblebee, Pantha, Red Star, and Raven.
-AnimalGurl55-

This was sad, but it was one of those sad stories that are so unbelievably good and moving. This was really good (onto the favorties it shall go) and I would love to see what happened to Robin, Bumblebee, Pantha, Red Star, and Raven.
-AnimalGurl55-
8/7/2007 c1
3wiretapx
this should be turned into a full-length story and published.
you have done such amazing work on this!
the concept is brilliant and even though it was only a one-shot, it really touched me and made me cry.
especially the very last line.
we are superheroes, we do not fear death.
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK.

this should be turned into a full-length story and published.
you have done such amazing work on this!
the concept is brilliant and even though it was only a one-shot, it really touched me and made me cry.
especially the very last line.
we are superheroes, we do not fear death.
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK.
2/24/2007 c1
15Tombe du ciel
Gah, I feel guilty about not reveiwing this earlier.
I absolutly love this! I'm not sure weigther it's because I like tragic stories or what... Maybe it's 'cause the villan is a Jell-o thing.
But I love it! Now, I want to make a story based on this... is that okay? Man, I love this!

Gah, I feel guilty about not reveiwing this earlier.
I absolutly love this! I'm not sure weigther it's because I like tragic stories or what... Maybe it's 'cause the villan is a Jell-o thing.
But I love it! Now, I want to make a story based on this... is that okay? Man, I love this!