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11/5/2015 c1 1kibaokami01
What was sokka doing in tophs tent?
8/13/2011 c1 Ki-ki7
Wow...lol...very interesting
9/29/2010 c1 2Pheonix Autumn
U8PDATE! PLZ!
7/27/2010 c1 lemonlime
more lemon but still pretty good
11/20/2008 c1 MikeJCaboozles
possibly the first mention of Anal sex I've seen in a fanfic... Still, interesting...
9/21/2008 c1 5Stargirlrox
Loved the story!
8/30/2008 c1 no name
... Ok they went from crushes to bf and gf to sex mates to discovered sex mates to fiancès in under 5 Min.'s...holy shit... Give more detail. Or was it them being shot by 476,579,297,006,158,864,933 of cupids drug filled arrows at once?
8/28/2008 c1 1Hurricane23
Jesus! Everything happened so fast. From this to that to this. Dont get me wrong i liked it alot. As some constructive critisizm i think you should use more detail and slow down a bit. Besides that great job!

Hurricane
7/15/2008 c1 Cyclone Psycho
Very rushed. He confesses, they do it, then he proposes. That seems pretty iffy to me.
3/13/2008 c1 nmimind
Caught in the act. LOL At least in this lemon he asked her how far he could go. Oh, and none of that him fiddling with her girly parts and making cum on the first try, cause we know that never happens. I can totally see that happening with 12 and 14 yr. old. You know he's thought about, A LOT.
12/5/2007 c1 7donjonkeeper
great story! 1 thing though, why in almost every story Sokka seems to get in their way!
10/24/2007 c1 8kakashiisasexymothereffer
hehe! IM REVIEWING MY OWN STORY! MUAAHAHAHAHA!
10/14/2007 c1 Momo
That was very interesting, it would be nice if you continued though.
7/29/2007 c1 red2021
LOL...LOVE thats total BS aang only want sex. trust me it's all about the pu'ssy
7/18/2007 c1 6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
I need to start by saying I don't watch Avatar. At least, normally I don't. Today my sister made me watch three consecutive episodes, including the Cave of Two Lovers. I needed to read something like this as an antidote to their stupidity in it. Good job.
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